唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'icing'이라는 단어 사용이 부적절하며, 문장이 중복되고 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 생각을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: No, I don't like singing because I can't sing well. I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself, so I usually avoid karaoke.

建议: 과거 경험을 말할 때 시제 일관성이 부족합니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않고, 구체적인 설명이 부족합니다. 과거 시제를 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was about 11 years old. I attended a music center for lessons, but I have forgotten most of what I learned and I am not good at singing now.

建议: 문장이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 자신감을 표현할 때 더 자연스럽고 완전한 문장을 사용해야 합니다. 문장 구조를 개선하고 명확한 이유를 덧붙이는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: If I were to sing, I would like to sing for my mom because she supports me. However, I lack confidence in my singing skills, so I rarely sing in front of others.

建议: 답변이 전반적으로 이해되지만, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 노래 제목과 가사에 대해 더 정확하게 표현하고, 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 해야 합니다.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people like me. For example, I enjoy listening to Taylor Swift, my favorite singer. Her song "New Romantics" has inspiring lyrics that make me feel refreshed and encouraged.

× No, I don't like singing because I don't know how to sing and I like listening to music, but I'm not enjoying that icing.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I don't know how to sing and I like listening to music, but I'm not enjoying that singing.

The word 'icing' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'singing'. The present participle 'singing' is the correct form here to express the activity. The error is a vocabulary mistake rather than a grammar form error, but it affects the meaning and clarity.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' requires a present perfect tense response to indicate experience up to now. 'I had' is past simple and incomplete here. The correct form is 'I have' or 'Yes, I have.'

× When I was maybe 11 years old.

✓ I was maybe 11 years old when I went to some music center.

The sentence 'When I was maybe 11 years old.' is a fragment and lacks a main verb or complete thought. It should be combined with the next sentence or restructured to form a complete sentence.

× I go to some music center and I learned how to sing, but now I forgot all about the abilities and I'm not good at singing.

✓ I went to some music center and I learned how to sing, but now I have forgotten all about the abilities and I'm not good at singing.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'forgot' should be present perfect 'have forgotten' to indicate the state continuing to the present.

× If I sing, I want to sing for my mom because I don't have any confidence in on my singing so I don't want to show my umm singing.

✓ If I sing, I want to sing for my mom because I don't have any confidence in my singing so I don't want to show my singing.

The preposition 'in on' is incorrect; only 'in' is needed before 'my singing'. Also, the phrase 'show my umm singing' is awkward; 'show my singing' is clearer.

× Skills so I can only.

✓ I can only sing for my mom.

The sentence fragment 'Skills so I can only.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be rephrased to a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people like me.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people like me.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I like Taylor Swift, she's my favorite singer and I like her sing her song umm new Romantics.

✓ I like Taylor Swift; she's my favorite singer and I like her singing her song 'New Romantics'.

The verb 'sing' should be in the gerund form 'singing' to function as a noun here. Also, song titles should be capitalized and enclosed in quotes for clarity.

× This lyrics makes me refresh and encourage so this thing is good.

✓ These lyrics make me feel refreshed and encouraged, so this is good.

'Lyrics' is plural, so 'this' should be 'these' and the verb should be plural 'make'. Also, 'refresh' and 'encourage' should be in past participle form 'refreshed' and 'encouraged' to describe feelings. 'This thing' is vague; 'this' suffices.