唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit redundant and slightly unnatural in phrasing. Try to be more concise and use smoother expressions. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on a natural flow.

示例: Yes, I enjoy singing, but mostly to myself because I'm not very confident. I usually sing when I hear a beautiful melody that I really like, but I prefer not to sing in public.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

示例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, when I was in school, I took a music class where I learned to play some instruments, but I didn't have the opportunity to study singing further.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas better, avoid run-on sentences, and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I mostly want to sing for my partner and friends. When I'm with them, I enjoy joining in their singing sessions. I have a friend who sings very well, and although singing with him can be a bit intimidating, it motivates me to improve.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is interrupted by hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently, avoid filler words, and complete your thoughts clearly with linking phrases.

示例: Yes, I definitely believe singing brings happiness. It helps people relax and can transport them to another world, which is why I think singing makes people feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing, but just to listen.

✓ Yes, I like singing, but only to listen.

The phrase 'just to listen' is awkward here; 'only to listen' is more natural and clear in English, improving the sentence's flow and meaning.

× I'm not a great singer, only I sing when I hear something very melodious or which I like the most.

✓ I'm not a great singer; I only sing when I hear something very melodious or that I like the most.

The original sentence misuses 'only I sing' which is unclear. Placing 'only' before 'sing' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'which' should be 'that' to correctly introduce the restrictive clause.

× No, I haven't learned about how to sing, but when I was in my school I had a musical class where I get to learn some instruments and I did not get any chance to learn more about singing after that.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, but when I was at school I had a music class where I got to learn some instruments, and I did not get any chance to learn more about singing after that.

The phrase 'learned about how to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'learned how to sing'. Also, 'in my school' should be 'at school' to indicate attendance. 'Musical class' is better as 'music class'. 'Get to learn' should be past tense 'got to learn' to match the past context.

× ...where I get to learn some instruments...

✓ ...where I got to learn some instruments...

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'got' instead of present tense 'get' to maintain tense consistency.

× Mostly I want to sing for my lover, my friends and when I'm with my friends I'd like to join them and I have a friend who sings well, usually I prefer singing with him, which gives me immense pressure and.

✓ Mostly, I want to sing for my lover and my friends. When I'm with my friends, I'd like to join them. I have a friend who sings well; usually, I prefer singing with him, which gives me immense pressure.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. Also, 'and' at the end is incomplete and should be removed.

× Yes, I definitely think that singing can bring happiness to the people. Uh, singing makes people relaxed and they like, uh, it feels like taking them to some other world. This is why I feel the singing is brings happiness and.

✓ Yes, I definitely think that singing can bring happiness to people. Singing makes people feel relaxed, and it feels like it takes them to another world. This is why I feel singing brings happiness.

The phrase 'makes people relaxed' is incorrect; it should be 'makes people feel relaxed'. The sentence 'they like, uh, it feels like taking them' is confusing and ungrammatical; rephrasing clarifies the meaning. The last sentence ends abruptly with 'and' and has an incorrect verb form 'is brings'; it should be 'singing brings happiness'.