唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Përmirësoni qartësinë dhe rrjedhshmërinë e përgjigjes suaj duke shmangur përsëritjet dhe duke përdorur fjalë të sakta. Për shembull, përqendrohuni në shprehjen e mendimit tuaj në mënyrë të thjeshtë dhe të qartë, duke përdorur fjalë të përshtatshme dhe duke shmangur gabimet gramatikore.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my stress. Although I am not very good at it, I enjoy listening to music every day as it makes me feel better.

建议: Përmirësoni strukturën e përgjigjes duke përdorur fjalë lidhëse dhe duke dhënë detaje më të qarta. Përpiquni të shmangni përsëritjet dhe të përdorni fjalë të sakta për të shprehur mendimin tuaj.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I have not attended any art or music school. However, I enjoy listening to music a lot.

建议: Përmirësoni qartësinë dhe kuptueshmërinë e përgjigjes suaj duke përdorur fjalë të sakta dhe duke formuluar fjali të plota. Përpiquni të jeni më të qartë në shprehjen e mendimit tuaj dhe të shmangni gabimet gramatikore.

示例: I would like to sing for my family and friends because it makes me happy and helps me express my feelings.

建议: Përmirësoni rrjedhshmërinë dhe qartësinë e përgjigjes duke përdorur fjalë lidhëse dhe duke shpjeguar më mirë idetë tuaja. Përpiquni të përdorni fjalë të sakta dhe të shmangni përsëritjet.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps reduce stress and improves people's mood.

× I like singing, but I know, I know I am I, I don't, I don't am very good at swimming, but I like the the music.

✓ I like singing, but I know I am not very good at swimming, but I like the music.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms and redundant words. 'I don't am' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am not'. Also, 'the the music' has a repeated article. The sentence should use the present tense correctly and remove redundancy.

× I like to listen music every day because it's very good for stress.

✓ I like to listen to music every day because it's very good for stress.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is a common error. The correct phrase is 'listen to music'.

× Not really not. I don't have a going school in art school or music school.

✓ Not really. I haven't gone to an art school or music school.

The phrase 'I don't have a going school' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'I haven't gone to'. Also, 'a going school' is ungrammatical; 'an art school' is the correct noun phrase.

× No, I don't go.

✓ No, I don't go.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and does not require correction.

× I like to watch for my life and I like to with my to my life.

✓ I like to watch my life and I like to live my life.

The phrase 'watch for my life' is incorrect; 'watch my life' or 'live my life' is more appropriate. Also, 'like to with my to my life' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'like to live my life'.

× Yes, I like seeing through my life.

✓ Yes, I like singing throughout my life.

The phrase 'seeing through my life' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or mishearing of 'singing through my life'. The correct verb is 'singing' and 'throughout' is the correct preposition.

× Yes, I think yes, because the singing and the music is very good for for people have stress and people inside is very good to see me.

✓ Yes, I think so, because singing and music are very good for people who have stress, and it is very good for me.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'singing and music is' should be 'singing and music are'. Also, 'people have stress' needs 'who' to connect the clause. 'People inside is very good to see me' is unclear and corrected to 'it is very good for me' for clarity.