唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I really interested' nên là 'I am really interested'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn về cảm xúc khi hát và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'untie the struggle'. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I am really interested in singing when I work out or study because it helps me feel satisfied and relieves my stress when I face problems.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'I have registered to a music course since 28' không chính xác, nên dùng 'I have been taking a music course since I was 28'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa như 'It brings me sometimes'. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: I have been taking a music course since I was 28 because I really love singing. It gives me satisfaction and excitement whenever I need it.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng hơn về người bạn muốn hát cho và tránh những câu không mạch lạc như 'Some so say sometime CR criticize me'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: I want to sing songs for my mom and my best friend when we go to karaoke. Although some people say I sing badly, they still listen to me.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'More about' nên là 'Moreover' hoặc 'In addition'.

示例: In my opinion, singing definitely brings happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions. For example, when I sing my favorite song, I feel joyful and less stressed. Moreover, singing with friends creates a sense of connection and excitement that brings people together.

× I really interested in singing when I go workout or I study because it makes me feel satisfied and untie the struggle when I face some with problems.

✓ I am really interested in singing when I work out or study because it makes me feel satisfied and relieves the struggle when I face some problems.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct present continuous tense 'I am really interested'. 'Go workout' is incorrect; it should be 'work out' as a verb phrase. 'Untie the struggle' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve the struggle' or 'ease the struggle'. 'Some with problems' is incorrect; it should be 'some problems'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I have registered to a music course since 28 so so up to now.

✓ I have been registered in a music course since I was 28 up to now.

The present perfect continuous tense 'have been registered' is more appropriate to express an action continuing from the past to the present. 'Since 28' is incomplete; it should specify 'since I was 28'. 'Registered to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'registered in' or 'enrolled in'. These changes correct tense and preposition usage.

× I really love singing so it brings me sometimes.

✓ I really love singing, so it brings me joy sometimes.

The phrase 'brings me sometimes' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'joy' clarifies what singing brings. Also, a comma before 'so' improves sentence structure. This correction clarifies meaning and improves sentence flow.

× It's bring me a thing of satisfaction and excitement when I need to.

✓ It brings me a feeling of satisfaction and excitement when I need to.

'It's bring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It brings' (third person singular present tense). 'A thing of satisfaction' is awkward; 'a feeling of satisfaction' is more natural. These corrections fix verb agreement and improve word choice.

× I really want to sing from sing a song for my mom or for my bestie when I go to karaoke.

✓ I really want to sing a song for my mom or my bestie when I go to karaoke.

The phrase 'sing from sing a song' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'sing a song'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used before 'my mom' and 'my bestie'. Removing 'from' corrects the sentence structure.

× Some so say sometime CR criticize me that I sing like a horse but they have to they still listen to me.

✓ Some people sometimes criticize me, saying that I sing like a horse, but they still listen to me.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'Some so say sometime CR' is unclear; replacing with 'Some people sometimes' clarifies meaning. 'Criticize me that I sing like a horse' is better expressed as 'criticize me, saying that I sing like a horse'. 'They have to they still listen to me' is corrected to 'but they still listen to me' for clarity and correctness.

× More about singing with friends or in a group can create a sense of connection and excitement which bring people together.

✓ Moreover, singing with friends or in a group can create a sense of connection and excitement which brings people together.

'More about' is incorrect; the correct transition is 'Moreover'. 'Which bring' should be 'which brings' to agree with the singular noun 'sense'. These corrections improve coherence and subject-verb agreement.