唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I like singing because it makes me happy. Although my voice is not very good, I enjoy singing with my friends and family." This is more effective and easier to understand.

示例: I like singing because it makes me happy. Although my voice is not very good, I enjoy singing with my friends and family.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer structure. For example, say "No, I have never learned singing from a professional coach. I only practice with my family and friends, and I ask them for feedback to improve." This makes your answer more natural and easier to follow.

示例: No, I have never learned singing from a professional coach. I only practice with my family and friends, and I ask them for feedback to improve.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid confusing sentences. For example, say "I want to sing for my family and my boyfriend because singing is my way to express love." This is clearer and more natural.

示例: I want to sing for my family and my boyfriend because singing is my way to express love.

建议: In English (Cambodia), improve clarity and grammar. For example, say "Yes, singing brings happiness. When I sing, my sadness fades away, and it makes me feel very happy." This is more natural and effective.

示例: Yes, singing brings happiness. When I sing, my sadness fades away, and it makes me feel very happy.

× I spend most of time singing but my voice isn't that very good but still I do love it.

✓ I spend most of the time singing but my voice isn't very good, but still I do love it.

The phrase 'most of time' is missing the definite article 'the'. It should be 'most of the time' to be grammatically correct in English.

× I used to spend time to sing with my friend, with my family.

✓ I used to spend time singing with my friends and my family.

The verb 'spend' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of multiple people.

× No, I have ever learned how to sing with a professional coach, but I have learned just with my family or friends.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing with a professional coach, but I have learned just with my family or friends.

The word 'ever' is incorrectly used here; the correct negative form is 'never' to indicate that the action has not happened at any time.

× I just think and ask them for a recommendation whether I think good or not.

✓ I just think and ask them for a recommendation on whether I sing well or not.

The phrase 'ask for a recommendation whether' is awkward; it is better to say 'ask for a recommendation on whether'. Also, 'think good' is incorrect; it should be 'sing well' to describe singing ability.

× Oh, I really want to save my family and I prefer singing for my boyfriend because they singing is I think I want to sing to express my love language.

✓ Oh, I really want to save my family and I prefer singing for my boyfriend because their singing is, I think, how I want to express my love language.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here; it should be 'their' to show possession. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs commas for clarity.

× It's really.

✓ It's really important to me.

The sentence 'It's really.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'important to me' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Whenever I send I think so it made me feel like my sadness fade away.

✓ Whenever I sing, I think it makes me feel like my sadness fades away.

The word 'send' is a typo and should be 'sing'. Also, the tense and subject-verb agreement need correction: 'made' should be 'makes' and 'fade' should be 'fades' to agree with singular subject 'sadness'.

× When I happy I think and it made me feel all very happy.

✓ When I am happy, I think and it makes me feel very happy.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am happy'. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with present tense and singular subject.