唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do hoặc cảm nhận của bạn về việc hát, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and feel confident. I especially like singing songs by BTS and Blackpink, which inspire me a lot.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không tự nhiên như "every day and every time" và nên bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I practice singing regularly because I love it. This helps me improve my skills gradually.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và mạch lạc, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic hơn.

示例: I haven't really thought about who I want to sing for, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my mother because she has always been very supportive and caring.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt cảm xúc khi hát và tác động của nó đến người khác.

示例: I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing, I feel confident and joyful, and I think it can lift others' spirits as well.

× I love many.

✓ I love many songs.

The word 'many' is a quantifier that needs to be followed by a plural noun. 'Music' is an uncountable noun, so 'many music' is incorrect. To express liking multiple pieces, 'songs' (plural countable noun) should be used after 'many'.

× I love many music either like like BTS or Blackpink.

✓ I love many kinds of music, like BTS or Blackpink.

The phrase 'either like like' is incorrect and redundant. Also, 'many music' is incorrect as 'music' is uncountable. Using 'many kinds of music' is appropriate. The preposition 'like' is used to give examples, so 'like BTS or Blackpink' is correct.

× And while singing I can also be another person like with confidence and helpful with others.

✓ And while singing, I can also be another person, confident and helpful to others.

The sentence structure is awkward and unclear. 'Like with confidence and helpful with others' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'confident and helpful to others' to correctly describe the qualities.

× I haven't learned how to sing, but I think that with my love for singing, I practice this every day and every time.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing, but I think that with my love for singing, I practice it every day and all the time.

The phrase 'every day and every time' is redundant and awkward. 'Every day' and 'all the time' are better expressions. Also, 'practice this' is less natural than 'practice it' referring to singing.

× Actually I haven't think about what I'm seeing for because I just love how how the way I'm singing.

✓ Actually, I haven't thought about who I'm singing for because I just love the way I'm singing.

'Haven't think' is incorrect; the past participle 'thought' is needed after 'haven't'. 'What I'm seeing for' is incorrect; it should be 'who I'm singing for'. Also, 'how how the way' is redundant; 'the way' suffices.

× But honestly, if I have the twos, I could see my mom, but she's really helpful and take care of me a lot.

✓ But honestly, if I have the chance, I would sing for my mom because she's really helpful and takes care of me a lot.

'If I have the twos' is unclear and incorrect; likely meant 'if I have the chance'. 'I could see my mom' should be 'I would sing for my mom' to fit context. 'Take care' needs third person singular 'takes care' to agree with 'she'.

× So I could say I want to say a song of love hers.

✓ So I could say I want to sing a song of love for her.

'A song of love hers' is incorrect. It should be 'a song of love for her' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'I want to say' should be 'I want to sing' in this context.

× 100% says singing can bring happiness to people in many ways.

✓ I 100% say singing can bring happiness to people in many ways.

The sentence lacks a subject. '100% says' is incorrect; it should be 'I 100% say' to indicate the speaker's opinion.

× Like when I like when I'm singing, I'm just feel like I am a popular persons are a really are really confident, but some people don't say so.

✓ Like when I'm singing, I just feel like I am a popular person and really confident, but some people don't think so.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Like when I like when' is redundant. 'I'm just feel' should be 'I just feel'. 'A popular persons are a really are really confident' is incorrect; it should be 'a popular person and really confident'. 'Don't say so' is better as 'don't think so'.