唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences. For example, say 'I like singing because it refreshes my mind and creates a peaceful environment.'

示例: Yes, I like singing very much. Whenever I have free time, I sing alone in my room because it refreshes my mind and creates a peaceful atmosphere.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use correct tenses and linking words to make your answer logical. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, say 'I have not formally learnt singing, but in school, I took a subject called Sangeet, where we learned Indian classical music.'

示例: No, I have not formally learnt singing. However, during my school days, I studied a subject called Sangeet, which focused on Indian classical music taught by my teacher.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences. For example, say 'I love singing for my family, especially my mother, who is a good singer. I enjoy singing Indian classical songs for her.'

示例: I enjoy singing for my family, especially my mother, because she is a good singer. Therefore, I prefer to sing Indian classical songs for her.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because many people face issues like anxiety or depression, and listening to music helps them cope.'

示例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. Many individuals face problems such as anxiety or depression, and listening to music helps them manage these feelings.

× Whenever I am free from my schedule, I always try to singing in my room alone and because of because of singing it gives me a refreshing mind and as well as the peaceful environment.

✓ Whenever I am free from my schedule, I always try to sing in my room alone because singing gives me a refreshing mind as well as a peaceful environment.

The verb 'try' should be followed by the base form 'to sing' not 'to singing'. Also, 'because of because of' is repetitive and incorrect. The phrase 'because singing gives me...' is the correct structure. Additionally, 'a peaceful environment' requires the article 'a'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No not really. I never learn how to sing but I remember that in my school time it it there were one subject name is Sangeet.

✓ No, not really. I never learned how to sing but I remember that in my school time there was one subject named Sangeet.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context. 'There were one subject' is incorrect; 'there was one subject' is correct because 'subject' is singular. 'Name is' should be 'named' to describe the subject properly.

× It is a Indian class.

✓ It is an Indian class.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'Indian'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× That's why my teacher was teaching and learning how to singing the classical music.

✓ That's why my teacher was teaching and learning how to sing classical music.

The verb 'to' should be followed by the base form 'sing' not 'singing'. Also, 'the classical music' is better as 'classical music' without 'the' here.

× That's why I always see him to sing such Indian classical songs.

✓ That's why I always see her sing such Indian classical songs.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect if referring to 'my mother' who is female; it should be 'her'. Also, 'see her sing' is the correct verb pattern.

× because my mother was.

✓ because my mother is.

The sentence is incomplete and uses past tense 'was' incorrectly. Since the mother is still a good singer, present tense 'is' should be used.

× That's why people always try to listening the music.

✓ That's why people always try to listen to music.

After 'try to', the base form of the verb 'listen' should be used, not the gerund 'listening'. Also, 'listen to music' is the correct phrase without 'the'.