唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and expressive, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I love singing because it is therapeutic and helps me express emotions that are hard to put into words. Moreover, it serves as a great way to relieve stress.

建议: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice (e.g., 'learn to see' should be 'learn to sing'). Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add more specific details about your learning process.

示例: I haven't attended a professional singing school, but I learned by watching YouTube videos and social media tutorials. While listening, I practiced by singing along to improve my skills.

建议: Your answer is heartfelt and specific. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases.

示例: I love singing to my four-month-old daughter, especially when she's sleepy. I usually sing gentle lullabies, which creates special bonding moments and brings me joy knowing my voice comforts her.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid redundancy. Also, watch for grammar (e.g., 'relate with' should be 'relate to').

示例: I believe singing brings happiness because people enjoy good music, especially when they relate to the lyrics. Additionally, singing helps relieve stress and uplifts their mood.

× I have not attended a professional institution to learn to see, but I learned how to sing through watching YouTube videos or social media platforms.

✓ I have not attended a professional institution to learn to sing, but I learned how to sing through watching YouTube videos or social media platforms.

The original sentence contains a typo 'learn to see' instead of 'learn to sing'. This is a lexical error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects the meaning. Correcting it to 'learn to sing' aligns with the intended meaning and maintains proper verb usage.

× While listening, I also tried to sing along with it.

✓ While listening, I also tried singing along with it.

After the verb 'tried', when expressing an attempt or experiment, the gerund (-ing form) is preferred to indicate the action attempted. 'Tried singing' suggests experimenting with singing, which fits better here than 'tried to sing'.

× I love singing to my daughter.

✓ I love singing for my daughter.

The verb 'sing' is commonly followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the person who benefits from the singing. Using 'to' is less appropriate in this context. Therefore, 'singing for my daughter' is the correct usage.

× I always sing her a gentle lullaby song.

✓ I always sing a gentle lullaby song to her.

The verb 'sing' when followed by an indirect object (the person) and a direct object (the song) typically requires the preposition 'to' before the person if the indirect object comes after the direct object. The original sentence places 'her' before the object without 'to', which is incorrect. Reordering and adding 'to' corrects the sentence.

× most of the people want to hear some good music, especially when they can relate with the lyrics and it brings them joy and it's also a way of relieving their stress.

✓ most people want to hear some good music, especially when they can relate to the lyrics, and it brings them joy; it's also a way of relieving their stress.

The phrase 'relate with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'relate to'. Also, 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' for naturalness. Additionally, the sentence is long and can be improved by adding punctuation for clarity.