唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“my singing skills is”应为“my singing skills are”，以及“I'm not feel confident”应为“I don't feel confident”。建议注意主谓一致和正确使用时态，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: No, I don't like singing because my parents often told me that my singing skills were poor when I was young. This negative feedback made me lose confidence in my voice.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“interested in seeing”应为“interested in singing”，“specialize at singing knowledge”表达不准确。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免语法错误，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

示例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I am not very interested in it. I only try to imitate my favorite singers and learn some basic skills from them.

建议: 回答中句子结构混乱，表达不完整，且存在语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and gives me a sense of accomplishment. For example, I like to sing alone while standing against a wall, which makes me feel calm.

建议: 回答内容较好，但最后一句“confidential method”用词不当，应为“effective method”或“common method”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并适当丰富细节，使表达更自然。

示例: Definitely. I think singing is an important way for people to express their emotions. When they feel happy, they often sing their favorite songs to show their joy and feel a sense of achievement. So, singing is a common and effective way to bring happiness.

× my parents often said that my singing skills is quite terrible when I was young.

✓ my parents often said that my singing skills were quite terrible when I was young.

这里的谓语动词“is”应与过去时态“said”保持一致，使用过去时态“were”。

× Because of that saying has been a negative experience for me and I'm not feel confident with my voice.

✓ Because of that saying, it has been a negative experience for me and I don't feel confident with my voice.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应添加主语“it”，并将“not feel”改为正确的否定形式“don't feel”。

× No, I'm not really interested in seeing so I don't really specialize at singing knowledge.

✓ No, I'm not really interested in singing so I don't really specialize in singing knowledge.

介词“in”用于表达兴趣，且“specialize”后应接介词“in”，而非“at”。

× Because of that I generally don't learn how to sing, I just learn know the basic skills and my idols singing.

✓ Because of that, I generally don't learn how to sing; I just know the basic skills and my idols' singing.

句子结构混乱，需用分号分隔两个独立分句，并修正“learn know”为“know”，以及“my idols singing”应改为“my idols' singing”表示所属关系。

× You want to sing for well, I usually prefer to sing for myself because it helped me relax and have a sense of accomplishment such as I just like to sing alone and standing in a wall to sing my favorite songs which makes me feel calm and.

✓ Well, I usually prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and gives me a sense of accomplishment. For example, I just like to sing alone and stand against a wall to sing my favorite songs, which makes me feel calm.

句子中“you”用错，应为“well”引导回答；“helped”时态错误，应为现在时“helps”；“standing in a wall”表达错误，应为“stand against a wall”；句子过长且缺少标点，需拆分成多个句子。

× So that's quite a confidential method.

✓ So that's quite a confident method.

“confidential”意为“机密的”，与语境不符，应使用“confident”表示“自信的”或“有效的”。