唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "my thoughts is very soft." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why you like singing and why you don't sing often with clear reasons.

示例: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I don't sing often as I lack confidence in my vocal skills and find it difficult to sing loudly.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repeating words like "sing" too often.

示例: Yes, I joined the choir in primary school where the teacher taught us singing techniques. We practised weekly, but I never took private lessons, so my training was informal.

建议: Your answer is honest but a bit vague. Try to give a more specific and natural response. Use linking words to organise your ideas and avoid repeating phrases like "I have never thought about this question."

示例: I haven't really considered singing for someone special. However, if I had to choose, I would sing for myself on my birthday, which is at the end of this month, to celebrate.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your points clearer. Also, avoid informal words like "Yeah" in formal speaking tests.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, listening to upbeat songs can make us feel more relaxed and cheerful, and often encourages us to dance along with the rhythm.

× However, I don't sing very often because I like the singing techniques and my thoughts is very soft.

✓ However, I don't sing very often because I like the singing techniques and my thoughts are very soft.

The subject 'my thoughts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× But I did not have any private singing lesson, so I don't really have a formal lesson on it.

✓ But I did not have any private singing lessons, so I didn't really have a formal lesson on it.

The phrase 'private singing lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match the context. Also, to maintain tense consistency, 'don't really have' should be changed to 'didn't really have' since the speaker is referring to the past.

× because my birthday is in the end of this month.

✓ because my birthday is at the end of this month.

The correct preposition to use with 'the end of' a time period is 'at', not 'in'. This is an incorrect preposition usage.