唱歌— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
I love to sing, definitely. The reason is when I sing, even if I don't have a beautiful voice, every time I sing, it helps me to relax my mind. It's it's like singing, it's like a way of relaxing.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I haven't been into a professional school to learn how to sing, but I do sing spontaneously while watching TV or watching YouTube or just by browsing social media. That's how I learned how to sing.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
Most of the time I just want to sing for myself. It's because I don't have that kind of beautiful voice that other people has. So I just think for myself to relax and whine and reduce some stress. Singing is a way of releasing some stress.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, I believe that singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is a way of releasing stress, tension and just felt like being spontaneous by singing and listening to the music.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is clear and expresses your feelings well, but it contains some redundancy and repetition. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more varied vocabulary to make your response more natural and effective. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.
示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and clear my mind. Even though my voice isn't perfect, singing is a great way for me to unwind after a busy day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分数: 80.0建议: Your answer is relevant and informative, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding repetition of similar phrases. Also, try to provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.
示例: I haven't attended a professional singing school, but I have learned by singing along with videos on YouTube and social media. This informal practice has helped me improve my skills gradually.
Who do you want to sing for?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer addresses the question but includes some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar, avoid repeating the same idea, and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.
示例: Usually, I prefer to sing for myself because I don't have a very beautiful voice. Singing helps me relax and relieve stress, so it's more of a personal enjoyment.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is positive and relevant, but it could be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence structure clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples.
示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people release stress and express themselves freely. Listening to music while singing also enhances the joyful experience.
语法
× I don't have that kind of beautiful voice that other people has.
✓ I don't have that kind of beautiful voice that other people have.
The subject 'other people' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
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