唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızı daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün cümlələrinizi tamamlamaq və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə etmək vacibdir. Məsələn, duyğularınızı daha dəqiq ifadə edin və cümlələri birləşdirərək daha məntiqli danışıq yaradın.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel extremely happy and relaxed. Whenever I sing, no matter the song, I feel like I'm on cloud nine, which brings me many positive emotions.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və düzgün qurmaq üçün qrammatikaya diqqət yetirin və fikirlərinizi daha konkret ifadə edin. Əlavə olaraq, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək cavabınızı daha məntiqli edin.

示例: To be honest, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, when I was a child, I learned to sing by listening and singing along with my siblings all day long.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəbləri daha konkret şəkildə açıqlayın.

示例: Honestly, I would only sing for my mother because it is a very special and emotional experience for me. I am quite shy about singing in front of others, so I usually avoid singing publicly.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Dəstək verən fikirlərinizi daha aydın və konkret ifadə edin.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. After a long and exhausting day, singing or listening to songs helps people feel relaxed and refreshed, which leads to positive emotions.

× Yes I do for the simple reason that when I sang anything no matter what it is, I feel on cloud 9 and I get many positive feelings.

✓ Yes I do for the simple reason that when I sing anything no matter what it is, I feel on cloud 9 and I get many positive feelings.

The sentence mixes past tense 'sang' with present tense 'feel' and 'get'. To maintain consistency and match the present tense context, 'sang' should be corrected to 'sing'.

× One of them it would be like. Amazing and I feel.

✓ One of them would be feeling amazing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, complete sentence.

× If truth be told, I don't have any experiment about learning anything but when I was a child I learned by my siblings all LP things because all day we we listen and sing all.

✓ If truth be told, I don't have any experience in learning anything but when I was a child I learned all LP songs from my siblings because we listened and sang all day.

'Experiment' is incorrect; the correct word is 'experience'. The preposition 'about' should be 'in' after 'experience'. 'Learned by my siblings all LP things' is awkward; it should be 'learned all LP songs from my siblings'. Also, 'we we listen' is a repetition and 'listen' should be past tense 'listened' to match the past context.

× Between you and me only I can sing any song for my mother because it would be sensitive feeling for me and I.

✓ Between you and me, I can only sing any song for my mother because it would be a sensitive feeling for me.

The phrase 'only I can sing any song for my mother' is awkward; 'I can only sing any song for my mother' is clearer. The ending 'and I' is incomplete and unnecessary, so it is removed.

× I am alternative about singing and that's why I think that never I sing any song.

✓ I am hesitant about singing and that's why I think that I never sing any song.

'Alternative' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'hesitant'. The phrase 'never I sing' is incorrect word order; it should be 'I never sing'.

× Off the top of my head, yes I do. When people think any songs they feel a sense of relaxation and refreshment after the day after exhausted day and that's why I think that it brings all people happiness and positive feelings.

✓ Off the top of my head, yes I do. When people think of any songs, they feel a sense of relaxation and refreshment after an exhausting day and that's why I think that it brings happiness and positive feelings to all people.

The phrase 'think any songs' is missing the preposition 'of'. 'After the day after exhausted day' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'after an exhausting day'. 'Brings all people happiness' is better expressed as 'brings happiness and positive feelings to all people'.