唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như sử dụng thì đúng và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "very love" và nên dùng "I love singing very much" hoặc "I really love singing".

示例: Yes, I really love singing because my dream is to become a singer. Also, singing helps me feel very relaxed and happy.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh dùng từ sai hoặc không phù hợp như "talked to me how to sing" nên dùng "taught me how to sing". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I have. My sister, who is a singer, taught me how to sing and explained some techniques about melody.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, "every everybody" không đúng, nên dùng "everyone". "My families" nên là "my family". Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I want to sing for everyone, including my family and friends, because I hope to become a professional singer one day.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như "Finger singing" không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và câu không mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because when they feel sad, listening to music can help them relax and feel better.

× Yes, I very love singing because my dream is become a singer.

✓ Yes, I really love singing because my dream is to become a singer.

The phrase 'I very love' is incorrect; 'very' is not used to modify verbs like 'love'. Instead, 'really' or 'very much' should be used. Also, 'my dream is become a singer' lacks the infinitive 'to' before 'become'. The correct form is 'my dream is to become a singer'. This improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yeah, And when I sing, I feel very relaxed.

✓ Yeah, and when I sing, I feel very relaxed.

The conjunction 'And' should not be capitalized after a comma. It should be lowercase 'and' to maintain proper sentence structure and punctuation.

× Yes I have. My sister talked to me how to sing because she is a singer and she taught me about some anode a melody.

✓ Yes, I have. My sister taught me how to sing because she is a singer and she taught me about some notes and melodies.

The verb 'talked to me how to sing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taught me how to sing'. Also, 'anode a melody' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'notes and melodies'. The past tense 'taught' is appropriate here. These corrections improve verb usage and vocabulary accuracy.

× I want to sing for every everybody, like my families, my friends or another, uh, because I want to become a singer.

✓ I want to sing for everybody, like my family, my friends, or others, because I want to become a singer.

The phrase 'every everybody' is redundant; 'everybody' alone is correct. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. 'Another' is incorrect here; 'others' is appropriate to refer to other people. These changes correct pluralization and word choice.

× Yes, I do, right. Finger singing can bring happiness to people because when people feel sad, yeah, they can listen to music to relax with me.

✓ Yes, I do. Singing can bring happiness to people because when people feel sad, they can listen to music to relax.

'Finger singing' is incorrect; likely a mishearing or typo for 'singing'. The phrase 'to relax with me' is awkward and unclear; it is better to say 'to relax'. Also, 'right' and 'yeah' are unnecessary fillers and can be omitted for clarity. These corrections improve clarity and pronoun usage.