唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些冗长且不够连贯，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免使用口语填充词如“you know”。可以先直接回答喜欢与否，再简要说明原因。

示例: I don't really enjoy singing because I often sing out of tune. However, I still go to karaoke with my friends for fun and socializing.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议注意语法准确性和避免重复。可以用更自然的表达方式说明学习经历和兴趣。

示例: Yes, I learned singing as a child because music lessons are compulsory in Chinese primary schools. However, I wasn't very interested, which is why I often sing out of tune.

建议: 回答不够清晰且有语法和表达错误，建议直接回答问题并用具体理由支持，避免重复和不相关内容。

示例: I want to sing for my family and friends because it helps strengthen our relationships and brings us closer together.

建议: 回答中有词汇错误（如“seating”应为“singing”），表达不够准确。建议使用正确词汇并提供具体例子，避免口语填充词。

示例: Yes, singing can definitely make people happier. For instance, when someone feels sad, singing can help them relax and reduce stress.

× Personally, I'm not a fan of singing, you know, I always sing songs out of tune, but I always go to the karaoke with my friends just for the entertainment and help us online.

✓ Personally, I'm not a fan of singing, you know, I always sing songs out of tune, but I always go to karaoke with my friends just for entertainment and to help us online.

The phrase 'go to the karaoke' is incorrect because 'karaoke' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'. Also, 'just for the entertainment and help us online' is awkward; it should be 'just for entertainment and to help us online' to correctly use the infinitive form after 'for'.

× Yes, definitely. I learned how to sing when I was a kid. You know, every primary school students required to receive the music lesson in China.

✓ Yes, definitely. I learned how to sing when I was a kid. You know, every primary school student is required to receive music lessons in China.

The phrase 'every primary school students' is incorrect because 'every' should be followed by a singular noun, so 'student' is correct. Also, 'required to receive the music lesson' needs the verb 'is' to form the passive voice and 'music lessons' should be plural as it refers to general lessons.

× But I'm not quite interested in this. So that is why I I always sing songs out of tune.

✓ But I'm not quite interested in this. So that is why I always sing songs out of tune.

The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed. The rest of the sentence is correct in present tense.

× Personally, I want to sing for my family and friends and as you know seeing for them can improve our relationship and you know I I always sing with my friends and families and it really help us online and contribute to our realization.

✓ Personally, I want to sing for my family and friends and as you know singing for them can improve our relationships and you know I always sing with my friends and family and it really helps us online and contributes to our realization.

The word 'seeing' should be 'singing' (likely a typo). 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple people. 'Families' should be 'family' as a collective noun here. 'Help' and 'contribute' need to be in third person singular form 'helps' and 'contributes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, remove the repeated 'I'.

× Alas, seating can definitely bring some positive influence to people.

✓ Alas, singing can definitely bring some positive influence to people.

The word 'seating' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' as per context. This is a word choice error rather than a preposition error, but it affects meaning significantly.

× For example, when people are in dumb mood, they can just sing for entertainment and help them to, you know, release their pressure.

✓ For example, when people are in a bad mood, they can just sing for entertainment and it helps them to, you know, release their pressure.

The phrase 'in dumb mood' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in a bad mood'. Also, 'help them to release' is awkward; it should be 'it helps them to release' to clarify the subject and verb agreement.