唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more coherent and natural. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'I've done. Glasses to upgrade my skills'. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I love singing because it is very therapeutic for me. It helps me relax and frees my mind from stress. Moreover, I have taken singing classes to improve my skills. Singing makes me feel happy and confident.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences like 'Infect elves'. Please try to respond directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about the types of singing classes you have taken.

示例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing by attending various singing classes. For example, I have studied classical singing, hip hop, and songs in English as well as regional languages. These classes have helped me improve my vocal skills.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like 'sync with Taylor Swift' and use correct vocabulary and grammar.

示例: I have not thought much about who I want to sing for, but if I get a chance, I would love to sing with Taylor Swift because she is a very versatile singer from America. Collaborating with her would be a great experience.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Please use complete sentences and linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons why singing brings happiness to people.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it is therapeutic. When a person improves their singing skills and performs in front of others, it boosts their confidence and joy. Therefore, singing definitely contributes to people's happiness.

× In fact, I've done. Glasses to upgrade my skills in singing.

✓ In fact, I've taken classes to upgrade my skills in singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I've done. Glasses' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'I've taken classes' to indicate attending lessons. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Singing it's just therapeutic for me.

✓ Singing is just therapeutic for me.

The phrase 'Singing it's' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'Singing is' to properly link the subject and predicate.

× And of course I know. By singing, I can be very free in my mind and. Also, be very clever.

✓ And of course I know that by singing, I can be very free in my mind and also be very clever.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'I know.' and 'and.' are sentence fragments. Combining them into a complete sentence with proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course, as I have mentioned earlier, have. Seek singing classes in various forms such as classical singing, hip hop, English singing and other languages.

✓ Yes, of course, as I have mentioned earlier, I have sought singing classes in various forms such as classical singing, hip hop, English singing, and other languages.

The original sentence is fragmented and missing the subject 'I' before 'have sought'. Also, 'seek' should be in past participle form 'sought' to match the present perfect tense 'have sought'. This correction ensures proper tense and sentence completeness.

× Infect elves. Learn singing in regional languages too.

✓ In fact, I have learned singing in regional languages too.

The original sentence contains nonsensical words 'Infect elves' and is fragmented. The intended phrase is likely 'In fact, I have learned singing in regional languages too.' This correction fixes spelling and sentence structure errors.

× I've not thought about that, the two whom I want to sing for, but probably I would tell that if I got a chance, I would love to sync with Taylor Swift, which is most versatile singer in America, and so do I want.

✓ I've not thought about whom I want to sing for, but probably I would say that if I got a chance, I would love to sing with Taylor Swift, who is the most versatile singer in America, and I want that too.

The original sentence is confusing and contains several errors: 'the two whom' is unclear, 'sync' should be 'sing', 'which is most versatile singer' should be 'who is the most versatile singer', and 'and so do I want' is awkward. The correction clarifies meaning, fixes pronoun use, verb choice, and sentence structure.

× Yes, indeed, singing is therapeutic for so many peoples.

✓ Yes, indeed, singing is therapeutic for so many people.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form when referring to a group of persons. 'Peoples' refers to distinct ethnic groups, which is not the intended meaning.

× And person. Gets very enormously happy when they. Bring up their singing skills in front of others.

✓ And a person gets very enormously happy when they bring up their singing skills in front of others.

The original sentences are fragmented and missing articles. Adding 'a' before 'person' and combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves grammar and clarity.