唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant words like 'Best number' and 'Wilderness' which confuse the listener. Try to give a clear, direct response to the question with a topic sentence, followed by two specific reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: No, I don't like singing because I find it hard to remember the lyrics, and I think my voice is not good for singing. Therefore, I prefer to just listen to music rather than sing myself.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'sync back in my basic medication things' and 'trying to learn how to think.' Focus on giving a clear, structured answer with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors. Keep your answer relevant and concise.

示例: Yes, I tried to learn how to sing when I was in primary school. We started with hymns, which were easy to learn. However, I stopped practicing when I went to senior high school.

建议: Your answer has many unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'never forced to sink' and 'sync with sue them.' Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

示例: At the moment, I don't have anyone specific to sing for. But in the future, if I have to sing, I would probably sing for my kids or my wife because singing can help children fall asleep.

建议: Your answer shows agreement but is repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'singing in his service and activity.' Try to give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and keep your answer concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people. Like other activities such as playing sports or games, singing allows people to express themselves and enjoy the moment, which makes them feel happy.

× Best number.

✓ No, I don't like singing.

The phrase 'Best number.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It lacks a subject and verb, making it unclear. The correction provides a complete sentence that directly answers the question.

× I don't like to sing.

✓ I don't like singing.

After verbs like 'like', the gerund form (-ing) is more natural when expressing general preferences. 'I don't like singing' sounds more fluent than 'I don't like to sing' in this context.

× I am bad at remembering lyrics to a song so I can sing along

✓ I am bad at remembering the lyrics of a song so I can sing along

The phrase 'lyrics to a song' is less common than 'lyrics of a song'. Also, adding 'the' before 'lyrics' specifies the particular lyrics being referred to.

× I think I have a bad voice for singer.

✓ I think I have a bad voice for singing.

The phrase 'bad voice for singer' is incorrect because 'singer' is a noun. The correct form is 'bad voice for singing', where 'singing' is a gerund acting as a noun.

× Wilderness.

✓ No, I prefer to just listen to music.

The word 'Wilderness.' is out of context and does not form a meaningful sentence. The correction provides a coherent sentence that fits the context.

× I tried to learn how to sync back in my basic medication things.

✓ I tried to learn how to sing back in my basic education.

The word 'sync' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sing'. 'Basic medication things' is incorrect; it should be 'basic education'. The past tense 'tried' is correct here.

× I am trying to learn how to think.

✓ I am trying to learn how to sing.

The word 'think' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sing'. The preposition 'to' is correctly used here.

× We started with hymns, which was quite easy to be taught and to go along with it.

✓ We started with hymns, which were quite easy to learn and sing along with.

The subject 'hymns' is plural, so the verb should be 'were'. The phrase 'easy to be taught' is awkward; 'easy to learn' is better. 'Go along with it' is replaced with 'sing along with' for clarity.

× When I'm when I go to Senior High School, got practice, didn't continue on so I stopped.

✓ When I went to Senior High School, I practiced singing but didn't continue, so I stopped.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting tense to past ('went'), adding subject 'I', and clarifying the sequence improves clarity.

× For now I don't have any one particular mind I want to sing for,

✓ For now, I don't have anyone in particular in mind I want to sing for,

The phrase 'any one particular mind' is incorrect. 'Anyone in particular in mind' is the correct expression.

× but if in the near future I never forced to sink,

✓ but if in the near future I am ever forced to sing,

The phrase 'never forced to sink' is incorrect. 'Am ever forced to sing' correctly uses the modal verb 'am' with 'forced' and corrects 'sink' to 'sing'.

× I think it probably have to be my kiss or probably my wife.

✓ I think it probably has to be my kids or probably my wife.

'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Kiss' is likely a typo for 'kids'.

× In my case, because when kids are young, sometimes they need to sync with sue them in order to put them to good sleep.

✓ In my case, when kids are young, sometimes they need to sing with someone to help them sleep well.

'Sync with sue them' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'sing with someone'. 'Put them to good sleep' is awkward; 'help them sleep well' is better.

× Because singing in his service and activity and if activities like playing football, running around, playing hide and seek come bring happiness to people.

✓ Because singing is a social activity, and activities like playing football, running around, and playing hide and seek can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'singing in his service and activity' is incorrect. It should be 'singing is a social activity'. 'Come bring' is incorrect; 'can bring' is correct.

× I definitely think a sink and also as an activity can bring happiness to people.

✓ I definitely think singing, as an activity, can bring happiness to people.

'A sink' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.