唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và phát âm sai từ như "seeing" thay vì "singing" và "released red" thay vì "release stress".

示例: Yes, I love singing because it is a fantastic way to express my emotions and release stress.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a little girl. It was part of my school course in Korea. I used to practice singing regularly and even participated in singing competitions.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều đúng cách và tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp như "big ****". Hãy nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I want to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm. Hãy tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết logic.

示例: Yes, I believe singing helps people release stress and feel happier. It is also a great way to express emotions and create a sense of community through group activities.

× Yes, I love seeing as a friend tastic way to embrace my emotion and released red.

✓ Yes, I love singing as a fantastic way to embrace my emotions and release stress.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrect here; it should be the gerund form 'singing' to express the activity. 'Friend tastic' is a misspelling of 'fantastic'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'Released red' is incorrect; it should be 'release stress' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I used to learn hard to sing when I was a little girl and his course of part of my school in Korean.

✓ Yes, I used to work hard to learn singing when I was a little girl, and it was part of my school course in Korea.

The phrase 'used to learn hard to sing' is awkward; 'used to work hard to learn singing' is correct. 'His course of part' is incorrect; it should be 'it was part of my school course'. 'Korean' should be 'Korea' as the country name.

× As I remember was Ari was in Granbury, are used to writing, singing regularly and even participated in competition for singing and see.

✓ As I remember, I was in Granbury, where I used to write and sing regularly and even participated in singing competitions.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Ari was in Granbury' seems to be a typo for 'I was in Granbury'. 'Are used to writing' should be 'I used to write'. 'Participated in competition for singing and see' should be 'participated in singing competitions'.

× I will learn to sing for my families because they have always been my big **** biggest supporters.

✓ I will learn to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. The phrase 'big **** biggest' seems to be a typo; 'biggest' is correct. The future tense 'I will learn to sing' is appropriate here.

× Yes, I believe I'm seeing an free choice quality people saying release edge of in which can make people feel happier and is a great way to embrace emotion.

✓ Yes, I believe singing is a free choice activity that helps people release stress, which can make people feel happier and is a great way to embrace emotions.

'I'm seeing' should be 'singing'. 'An free choice quality people saying release edge of' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'a free choice activity that helps people release stress'. 'Embrace emotion' should be plural 'emotions'.

× An really stressed seeing can create a sense of community an activities like carrot cake can.

✓ Really stressed singing can create a sense of community, and activities like karaoke can too.

'An really stressed seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'really stressed singing'. 'An activities like carrot cake can' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'and activities like karaoke can'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.