唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

示例: I don't really like singing because I lack confidence and feel shy singing in front of others. Instead, I prefer listening to music.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct verb usage. Also, try to directly answer the question and provide supporting details logically using linking words.

示例: No, I have never tried to learn singing because I feel uncomfortable singing in front of others. Instead, I enjoy listening to music and playing the guitar.

建议: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use clear and simple sentences to express your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: If I were to sing, I would sing for myself because it helps me relax and enjoy. Especially, I like singing in the shower because it is a fun activity.

建议: Your answer shows good ideas but has many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to use correct words and sentence structures. Also, provide clear reasons and examples to support your opinion.

示例: Absolutely, singing can make people happy. It helps express emotions and relieve stress from daily life. For example, many people enjoy singing in the shower to feel relaxed.

× I don't really like singing because I don't have a singing ability where I feel shy when I singing in front of the orders.

✓ I don't really like singing because I don't have the ability to sing and I feel shy when I sing in front of others.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect because after 'when' we need the base form of the verb with the correct tense, so 'sing' is correct. Also, 'orders' is likely a typo for 'others'. The phrase 'a singing ability' is awkward; 'the ability to sing' is more natural.

× I prefer to listening music instead.

✓ I prefer listening to music instead.

After 'prefer', the correct form is either 'prefer to listen' or 'prefer listening'. Also, 'listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× In fact said no I don't I haven't had I haven't any trying to learn and singing because I haven't any coffee down to singing in front of the orders.

✓ In fact, no, I haven't tried to learn singing because I don't have the confidence to sing in front of others.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I haven't had I haven't any trying' is incorrect. The phrase 'coffee down to singing' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'confidence to sing'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct grammar.

× Instead I want to listening to music.

✓ Instead, I want to listen to music.

After 'want to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'listen' instead of 'listening'.

× I prefer to playing guitar.

✓ I prefer playing the guitar.

After 'prefer', use either 'prefer to play' or 'prefer playing'. Also, 'guitar' usually takes the definite article 'the' when referring to the instrument in general.

× Actually if I'm going to the singing I want to sing for myself because it makes me a cover dance and relax I'm confortable.

✓ Actually, if I am going to sing, I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The phrase 'going to the singing' is incorrect; it should be 'going to sing'. 'Makes me a cover dance' is unclear and likely incorrect; probably intended 'makes me feel comfortable and relaxed'. 'Confortable' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'.

× Specially I want to sing in the shower and it's very fun activity.

✓ Especially, I want to sing in the shower because it's a very fun activity.

'Specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially'. Also, 'very fun activity' needs an article 'a' before 'very fun activity'.

× Absolutely a sending can make people happy.

✓ Absolutely, singing can make people happy.

'a sending' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singing'. This is a spelling error affecting the pronoun usage.

× It helps to a express emission, emotionally, emotions and escape from stress of.

✓ It helps to express emotions emotionally and escape from stress.

'to a express emission' is incorrect; it should be 'to express emotions'. 'Emission' is a wrong word here; 'emotions' is correct. The phrase 'escape from stress of' is incomplete and should be 'escape from stress'.

× Daily live an especially people sing in the shower.

✓ Daily life, especially, people sing in the shower.

'Daily live an' is incorrect; it should be 'daily life'. The sentence is fragmented and needs commas for clarity.