唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and informal expressions like 'LAX' which should be 'relax'. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use more precise vocabulary. Try to keep your sentences clear and concise, and correct minor mistakes to sound more natural.

示例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence in my voice. However, I love listening to music, especially when I want to relax or feel happy.

建议: Your response is brief and has grammatical errors such as 'keen interest' instead of 'keenly interested'. Try to use a complete sentence with correct grammar and add a little detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not keenly interested in singing.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating previous answers directly; instead, rephrase and expand your response. Use linking words to improve coherence and provide a clear topic sentence.

示例: Since I don't enjoy singing, I don't have anyone in particular I would want to sing for.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'une lifting' and 'to wed'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I definitely believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. Moreover, singing in a group can be very uplifting and enjoyable.

× No, I don't really enjoy singing becauses I am not very confident about my words.

✓ No, I don't really enjoy singing because I am not very confident about my words.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. This is a common spelling error. Use 'because' to show reason or cause.

× However, I love listening to music especially when I want to LAX or feel happy.

✓ However, I love listening to music especially when I want to relax or feel happy.

The word 'LAX' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'relax'. 'LAX' is an abbreviation for Los Angeles International Airport and is not appropriate in this context.

× No, I did not learn how to sing in my life because I'm not keen interest in singing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing in my life because I'm not keen on singing.

The sentence uses simple past 'did not learn' which is less appropriate for life experience; present perfect 'have never learned' is better. Also, 'keen interest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keen on' followed by a noun or gerund.

× No, I did not learn how to sing in my life because I'm not keen interest in singing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing in my life because I'm not keen on singing.

The phrase 'keen interest in' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'keen on' followed by the activity. So, 'keen on singing' is correct.

× As I already mentioned that I did not like singing, so that's why I don't like to sing for someone.

✓ As I already mentioned, I do not like singing, so I don't like to sing for anyone.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'As' and 'so that's why' together, which is incorrect. Also, 'did not like' should be present tense 'do not like' to match the current feeling. 'Someone' is better replaced with 'anyone' in negative sentences.

× Just definitely I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ I definitely believe singing can bring happiness to people.

The phrase 'Just definitely I believe' is awkward and incorrect. The subject 'I' should come before the adverb 'definitely'. Also, 'can definitely bring' is redundant; one 'definitely' is enough.

× Singing allow people to express their emotions and can be very une lifting certainly when done with other in a group or towed.

✓ Singing allows people to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, certainly when done with others in a group or together.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'Singing'. The word 'une lifting' is incorrect; the correct word is 'uplifting'. 'Other' should be plural 'others'. 'Towed' is incorrect; likely intended 'together'.