巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, for example, say "I like eating chocolate because it improves my mood and makes me happy." Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Yes, definitely. I like eating chocolate because it improves my mood and makes me feel happy.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I eat chocolate once or twice a month, especially on weekends. I usually share it with my friends and cousins." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I eat chocolate once or twice a month, especially on weekends. Usually, I share it with my friends and cousins.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use past tense consistently and avoid confusion. For example, say "Yes, I used to eat chocolate often. My parents gave me chocolates on my birthdays and special occasions, which made me very happy."

示例: Yes, I used to eat chocolate often. My parents gave me chocolates on my birthdays and special occasions, which made me very happy.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give clear reasons with linking words. For example, "Chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy its taste and often give it as gifts on special occasions."

示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy its taste and often give it as gifts on special occasions.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to be specific and correct. For example, "Since my childhood, I have loved all kinds of chocolate flavors, but my favourite is Cadbury Dark Milk Chocolate because it is very sweet."

示例: Since my childhood, I have loved all kinds of chocolate flavors, but my favourite is Cadbury Dark Milk Chocolate because it is very sweet.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains redundancy and minor errors. For example, say "Yes, absolutely. Chocolate is a popular gift choice, especially for birthdays and other special occasions, because it is well-liked by many people."

示例: Yes, absolutely. Chocolate is a popular gift choice, especially for birthdays and other special occasions, because it is well-liked by many people.

× I like eating chocolates because chocolates reveals my mood and it it's make my mood very happy.

✓ I like eating chocolate because chocolate reveals my mood and it makes my mood very happy.

The word 'chocolates' should be singular 'chocolate' when referring to the substance in general. Also, 'chocolates reveals' is incorrect because 'chocolates' is plural and should be 'reveal'. However, since we changed to singular 'chocolate', the verb should be 'reveals'. 'It it's make' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I eat chocolate once or twice a month, specially on weekends.

✓ I eat chocolate once or twice a month, especially on weekends.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' when emphasizing a particular case or example.

× I eat chocolates with my friends and I also distribute this chocolate to my cousins as well.

✓ I eat chocolate with my friends and I also distribute this chocolate to my cousins as well.

When referring to chocolate in general, the singular form 'chocolate' is preferred. 'Chocolates' refers to individual pieces or types, but here the general term is more appropriate.

× Yes, I really eat chocolate.

✓ Yes, I really ate chocolate.

The question is about past habits, so the past tense 'ate' should be used instead of the present tense 'eat'.

× When I was a kid, my parents gave me chocolates on my birthdays and special occasions to make made me feel felt happy.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents gave me chocolates on my birthdays and special occasions to make me feel happy.

The phrase 'to make made me feel felt happy' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to make me feel happy' using the base form after 'make'.

× Chocolate is very popular all over the world because these chocolates are very expensive because many people use chocolates to give gifts to others and so many people eat chocolates.

✓ Chocolate is very popular all over the world because it is often expensive, many people use chocolate to give gifts to others, and many people eat chocolate.

The use of 'these chocolates' is incorrect when referring to chocolate in general; 'it' or 'chocolate' should be used. Also, 'chocolates' should be singular 'chocolate' when referring to the substance generally.

× Since my childhood I love all kind of flavors of chocolates but if talk about one I really like Cadbury Dark milk chocolate because these chocolates are very sweets.

✓ Since my childhood I have loved all kinds of flavors of chocolate but if I talk about one, I really like Cadbury Dark Milk chocolate because this chocolate is very sweet.

'All kind' should be 'all kinds' to agree in number. 'Flavors of chocolates' should be 'flavors of chocolate' as chocolate is uncountable here. 'These chocolates are very sweets' is incorrect; it should be 'this chocolate is very sweet'.

× It is very good to use chocolate as a gift to others, especially on their birthdays and any other event.

✓ It is very good to use chocolate as a gift for others, especially on their birthdays and any other event.

The correct preposition after 'gift' is 'for' when indicating the recipient.

× People always choose chocolate as a gift because chocolate is one of the best gift gifts.

✓ People always choose chocolate as a gift because chocolate is one of the best gifts.

The phrase 'gift gifts' is redundant; only 'gifts' is needed. Also, 'gifts' should be plural to match 'one of the best'.