巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

示例: No, I don't like eating chocolate because it contains a lot of sugar, which I think is unhealthy. Also, I don't find its taste very appealing.

建议: 回答较为混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答频率，并用连词连接理由，使表达更连贯。

示例: I rarely eat chocolate, maybe once or twice a year, because I find it too sweet for my taste.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且结尾不完整。建议用完整句子表达，并具体说明原因。

示例: Yes, I used to eat chocolate often as a child, especially during New Year, because I loved its sweet taste.

建议: 表达混乱，词汇使用错误，逻辑不清晰。建议用简单句子说明巧克力受欢迎的原因，并举例说明。

示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and comes in many varieties, like dark and white chocolate, which suit different preferences.

建议: 表达不准确，词汇使用错误，句子结构混乱。建议清晰表达喜好并说明原因。

示例: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is less sweet and has a rich taste that I enjoy. It also makes me feel happy quickly.

建议: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议用连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

示例: I don't think chocolate is always a good gift because not everyone likes sweet things. It's better to know the person's preferences before choosing a gift.

× I don't like eating chocolate because it's, uh, including includes so many sugar and will have a harmful influence on my tears and I think it's not very delicious.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because it includes so much sugar and will have a harmful influence on my teeth, and I think it's not very delicious.

这里'so many sugar'中的'sugar'是不可数名词，应该用'so much sugar'。另外，'tears'应为'teeth'（牙齿），可能是拼写错误。

× I think maybe sometimes one year, once or twice because I seldom eat chocolate, it's so sweet.

✓ I think maybe sometimes in one year, once or twice, because I seldom eat chocolate; it's so sweet.

句中缺少介词'in'来表示时间范围，'sometimes one year'应为'sometimes in one year'。

× I think maybe sometimes one year, once or twice because I seldom eat chocolate, it's so sweet.

✓ I think maybe sometimes in one year, once or twice, because I seldom eat chocolate; it's so sweet.

缺少介词'in'，表示时间范围时应使用'in one year'。

× I searched all kinds of sugars, especially chocolate, and when New Year coming I will eat all kinds of chocolates because it's so yummy for me.

✓ I ate all kinds of sweets, especially chocolate, and when New Year comes I will eat all kinds of chocolates because they're so yummy for me.

'sugars'通常指不同种类的糖，但这里应指甜食，改为'sweets'更合适。'when New Year coming'缺少动词，应为'when New Year comes'。

× when New Year coming I will eat all kinds of chocolates because it's so yummy for me.

✓ When New Year comes, I will eat all kinds of chocolates because they're so yummy for me.

'when New Year coming'缺少谓语动词，正确用法是'when New Year comes'，表示一般现在时。

× I think maybe it's test it's so sweet but it's have other other tests for example soil or not very sweet and they have other types chocolate for example, black and white.

✓ I think maybe its taste is so sweet but it has other tastes, for example, sour or not very sweet, and there are other types of chocolate, for example, black and white.

'test'应为'taste'，'it's have'应为'it has'，'tests'应为'tastes'，'soil'应为'sour'。'types chocolate'应为'types of chocolate'。

× it's have other other tests for example soil or not very sweet and they have other types chocolate for example, black and white.

✓ it has other tastes, for example sour or not very sweet, and there are other types of chocolate, for example, black and white.

第三人称单数动词应使用'has'而非'have'。

× they have other types chocolate for example, black and white.

✓ they have other types of chocolate, for example, black and white.

'types chocolate'缺少介词'of'，正确表达为'types of chocolate'。

× Maybe black chocolate because you know, it has a little bit of fever and I think it's a new and wonderful test for me.

✓ Maybe black chocolate because you know, it has a little bit of flavor and I think it's a new and wonderful taste for me.

'fever'应为'flavor'，'test'应为'taste'。

× I don't like so sweet things so it can give me quickly and happy feeling in sometimes at sometimes.

✓ I don't like very sweet things, so it can give me a quick and happy feeling sometimes.

'so sweet things'应为'very sweet things'，'quickly'是副词，应改为形容词'quick'修饰'feeling'，'in sometimes at sometimes'表达不正确，简化为'sometimes'。

× I think gifts is so important for others, so we mustn't know each other's favor and we can choose gifts better.

✓ I think gifts are very important for others, so we must know each other's preferences to choose gifts better.

'mustn't know'用法错误，应为'must know'表示必须知道。

× I think gifts is so important for others, so we mustn't know each other's favor and we can choose gifts better.

✓ I think gifts are very important for others, so we must know each other's preferences to choose gifts better.

'gifts is'主谓不一致，'gifts'为复数，应使用'are'。

× maybe somebody don't like it thinking it's so sweet.

✓ Maybe somebody doesn't like it, thinking it's so sweet.

主语'somebody'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用'doesn't'而非'don't'。