巧克力— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
考生
Actually I'm not into sweets so I don't like to eat chocolate or other kind of desserts, but I I do like sweets which contains fruit, fruity flavor or white cream.
考官
How often do you eat chocolate?
考生
As I mentioned before, I'm not into chocolate but sometimes I crave chocolate so I'd say it's about once a week or when we call out and drink tea I'd have chocolate on the side.
考官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
考生
Uh, yes, like any other kid, I was into chocolate and uh, really liked uh, it stays, umm, especially when umm, my mom bought us chocolate. I used to uh, eat it uh, without my mom knowing because she didn't allow me to eat too much.
考官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
考生
Uh, I think the popularity about chocolate is related to its, uh, sweet taste. Umm, and everyone likes to have a sweet. And I also heard that when eating chocolate you become more happier, so maybe it's connected to this.
考官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
考生
Uh, my favorite type of chocolate is white chocolate, uh, even though some people say umm, it doesn't contain any chocolate, umm, in the white one, uh, and it's mostly sugar, but I still like it's sweet taste and it's very delicious.
考官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
考生
Yes, I think chocolate is a nice gift to give to someone because a lot of people like chocolate and would be happy to receive it, and it suits a lot of people's taste.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
分数: 75.0建议: Cavabınız təbii səslənir, lakin təkrarlardan qaçın və cümlələri daha qısa və aydın edin. Məsələn, "I don't like chocolate or other desserts because I'm not into sweets, but I enjoy sweets with fruit or white cream." kimi ifadə edə bilərsiniz.
示例: I don't like chocolate or other desserts because I'm not into sweets, but I enjoy sweets with fruit or white cream.
How often do you eat chocolate?
分数: 80.0建议: Cümlələrinizdə əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və ifadələri daha aydın edin. Məsələn, "Although I don't usually eat chocolate, I sometimes crave it, so I have it about once a week, especially when I go out for tea."
示例: Although I don't usually eat chocolate, I sometimes crave it, so I have it about once a week, especially when I go out for tea.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
分数: 70.0建议: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" kimi sözlər var, bunları azaltmağa çalışın. Cümlələri daha qısa və aydın edin. Məsələn, "Yes, I loved chocolate as a kid, especially when my mom bought it. Sometimes, I ate it secretly because she didn't allow me to have too much."
示例: Yes, I loved chocolate as a kid, especially when my mom bought it. Sometimes, I ate it secretly because she didn't allow me to have too much.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
分数: 75.0建议: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan və lazımsız "uh" sözlərindən qaçının. Daha aydın və əlaqəli ifadələr istifadə edin. Məsələn, "Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its sweet taste, and many people enjoy sweets. Also, I heard that eating chocolate can make people happier."
示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its sweet taste, and many people enjoy sweets. Also, I heard that eating chocolate can make people happier.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
分数: 70.0建议: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" sözləri var, onları azaltmağa çalışın. Cümlələri daha qısa və aydın edin. Məsələn, "My favorite chocolate is white chocolate. Although some say it contains mostly sugar and no real chocolate, I enjoy its sweet and delicious taste."
示例: My favorite chocolate is white chocolate. Although some say it contains mostly sugar and no real chocolate, I enjoy its sweet and delicious taste.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
分数: 85.0建议: Cavabınız yaxşıdır, lakin daha çox müxtəlif ifadələr və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edə bilərsiniz. Məsələn, "Yes, chocolate makes a great gift because many people enjoy it, and it suits various tastes, making recipients happy."
示例: Yes, chocolate makes a great gift because many people enjoy it, and it suits various tastes, making recipients happy.
语法
× I don't like to eat chocolate or other kind of desserts
✓ I don't like to eat chocolate or other kinds of desserts
The phrase 'other kind of desserts' is incorrect because 'other' refers to multiple types, so the plural form 'kinds' should be used to match the plural noun 'desserts'.
× I do like sweets which contains fruit, fruity flavor or white cream
✓ I do like sweets which contain fruit, fruity flavor or white cream
The verb 'contains' should agree with the plural subject 'sweets', so it should be 'contain' instead of 'contains'.
× I don't like to eat chocolate or other kind of desserts
✓ I don't like to eat chocolate or other kinds of desserts
The phrase 'other kind of desserts' is incorrect because 'other' refers to multiple types, so the plural form 'kinds' should be used to match the plural noun 'desserts'.
× I do like sweets which contains fruit, fruity flavor or white cream
✓ I do like sweets which contain fruit, fruity flavor or white cream
The verb 'contains' should agree with the plural subject 'sweets', so it should be 'contain' instead of 'contains'.
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