巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'underpin'이라는 단어 사용이 부적절하며, 문장이 길고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 답변을 구성하세요.

示例: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it makes me feel happy. My favorite is Kana chocolate from Lotte, which costs about 1000 won.

建议: 시제 일관성이 부족하고 문장이 다소 어색합니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 명확히 구분하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: I usually eat chocolate about five times a week, and during midterms, I eat it almost every day.

建议: 문법 오류가 많고 문장이 길며 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 과거 시제 사용에 주의하고, 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 답변하세요.

示例: Not at all. I didn't enjoy eating chocolate as a kid because my parents didn't like it. However, as I grew older, I started eating chocolate every day.

建议: 어휘 선택이 부적절하고 중복된 단어가 있습니다. 더 정확한 표현과 구체적인 이유를 사용하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

示例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and comes in small sizes, making it a convenient snack for many people.

建议: 비교 구문에서 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'more sweeter' 대신 'sweeter'를 사용하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

示例: My favorite flavor is mild milk chocolate. I prefer milk chocolate to dark chocolate because it is sweeter. The brand I like is Cacao Tea.

建议: 중복된 단어가 있고 문장이 다소 어색합니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Of course. Chocolate is a good gift because it energizes people and is affordable, making it a nice small present for friends.

× my underpin comes out when I eat chocolate

✓ my pimples come out when I eat chocolate

The word 'underpin' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'pimples', which is plural. Also, 'comes' should be 'come' to agree with the plural noun 'pimples'.

× its price is about 1000

✓ its price is about 1000 won

The sentence lacks a unit for the price; adding 'won' clarifies the currency. No plural issue here, but clarification is needed.

× I think I ate chocolate maybe five times a week or more than five times a week

✓ I think I eat chocolate maybe five times a week or more than five times a week

The question asks about current habits, so present tense 'eat' is appropriate instead of past tense 'ate'.

× I almost eat chocolate every day

✓ I almost eat chocolate every day

This sentence is correct in present tense; no correction needed.

× I've I've not enjoy eating chocolate when I was a kid

✓ I didn't enjoy eating chocolate when I was a kid

Incorrect use of present perfect 'I've' and verb form 'enjoy'. The past simple 'didn't enjoy' is correct for past habits.

× my mom and dad don't like eating chocolate

✓ my mom and dad didn't like eating chocolate

Referring to past time 'when I was a kid', so past tense 'didn't like' is appropriate instead of present 'don't like'.

× But as I get older I've been used to eat chocolate every single day

✓ But as I got older, I got used to eating chocolate every single day

The phrase 'I've been used to eat' is incorrect. The correct past tense is 'got used to eating' to indicate a past habit change.

× it's sweetness is untouchable

✓ its sweetness is unbeatable

'It's' is a contraction for 'it is'; the possessive pronoun 'its' should be used. Also, 'untouchable' is not appropriate here; 'unbeatable' fits better.

× it's it's really small so people can try it for some some snacks

✓ it's really small so people can try it as a snack

Repeated 'it's' is redundant. Also, 'for some some snacks' is incorrect; 'as a snack' is the correct phrase.

× I prefer milk chocolate than dark chocolate because it is more sweeter than dark one

✓ I prefer milk chocolate to dark chocolate because it is sweeter than the dark one

The correct preposition after 'prefer' is 'to', not 'than'. Also, 'more sweeter' is incorrect; 'sweeter' is the correct comparative form.

× the brand name is cacao tea

✓ the brand name is Cacao Tea

Proper nouns like brand names should be capitalized.

× it's it's not too expensive or too cheap, so it can be a small present for friends

✓ it's not too expensive or too cheap, so it can be a small present for friends

Repeated 'it's' is redundant and should be removed.