巧克力— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中有重复表达“avoid to avoid”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: No, I'm not a big fan of chocolate because its texture feels sticky and heavy in my mouth, so I usually avoid eating it.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达，如“some of my friend hand that to me”和“quite in a low frequency”。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达。

示例: I don't eat chocolate very often because I don't like the texture. I usually only eat it when a friend offers me some.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，如“just talked to my parents”和“parents are quite respect”。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达。

示例: No, I rarely ate chocolate as a child because after I first tried it, I told my parents I didn't like the sticky and heavy texture. They respected my feelings and didn't buy much for me.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够连贯，如“depend on 2 reasons”和“some of the person just key on”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅。

示例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide for two reasons. First, many people enjoy its rich and heavy texture and taste. Second, advertisements often promote chocolate as a gift for Valentine's Day, symbolizing love.

建议: 回答较好，但句子末尾“so you can just keep”表达不完整且不自然。建议完善句子，使表达更清晰。

示例: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate with wine because I first tried it in England. The combination creates a rich and complex taste that leaves a lasting impression.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“was often be considered”和“great gift gift”。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的语法。

示例: Yes, I think chocolate is a convenient gift, especially for people you don't know well. Most people like chocolate, and it's often considered a thoughtful gift for special occasions like birthdays.

× so I often avoid to avoid eating them.

✓ so I often avoid eating them.

avoid后面应直接接动名词形式，不能接不定式。这里应使用avoid eating，而不是avoid to avoid eating。

× because I didn't liked the texture,

✓ because I didn't like the texture,

助动词did后面动词用原形，不能用过去式liked，应改为like。

× some of my friend hand that to me.

✓ some of my friends hand that to me.

some of后面应接复数名词friends，而不是friend。

× So it was quite in a low frequency.

✓ So it was quite infrequent.

low frequency用法不当，in a low frequency不符合习惯表达，应改为infrequent表示不频繁。

× No I I seldom ate it because the first time I ate it I just talked to my parents and I don't like the texture it made me feel sticky and heavy.

✓ No, I seldom ate it because the first time I ate it I just talked to my parents and I didn't like the texture; it made me feel sticky and heavy.

时态不一致，描述过去经历时应使用过去时，don't like应改为didn't like。

× So my parents are quite respect my feelings so they didn't buy that much for me.

✓ So my parents quite respect my feelings, so they didn't buy that much for me.

respect是动词，不能用are respect，应直接用respect。

× I think it depend on 2 reasons,

✓ I think it depends on 2 reasons,

主语it是第三人称单数，动词depend应加s变为depends。

× first some of the person just key on that heavy and rich texture and taste

✓ first some of the people just focus on that heavy and rich texture and taste

some of后应接复数people，person是单数。key on用法不当，应改为focus on。

× and second I think is the advertisement because a lot of advertisement just say that by the chocolate on Valentine's Day.

✓ and second I think it is the advertisement because a lot of advertisements just say to buy chocolate on Valentine's Day.

advertisement应复数advertisements；say后接不定式buy而非by；冠词缺失。

× It's a way to show your love.

✓ It's a way to show your love.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Flavor of chocolate I think I would pick the dark chocolate with a wine flavor

✓ As for the flavor of chocolate, I think I would pick dark chocolate with a wine flavor

句子结构不完整，缺少介词短语引导，需加As for引导。

× because I remember the time I first ate this kind of chocolate in England.

✓ because I remember the time when I first ate this kind of chocolate in England.

时间状语从句缺少连接词when。

× It really impressed me because the combination of wine and the dark chocolate just create a very rich and complex taste for you and so you can just keep.

✓ It really impressed me because the combination of wine and dark chocolate just creates a very rich and complex taste for you, so you can just keep enjoying it.

主谓不一致，combination是单数，动词create应为creates；句子不完整，keep后应接动名词enjoying。

× Yes, I think so, because chocolate is a very convenient gift that you can give to the person that you are not familiar with.

✓ Yes, I think so, because chocolate is a very convenient gift that you can give to a person you are not familiar with.

冠词使用错误，the person应改为a person。

× And second, I think most of the people don't hate chocolate at all and it was often be considered as a very considerable gift during special occasions like birthday.

✓ And second, I think most people don't hate chocolate at all and it is often considered a very suitable gift during special occasions like birthdays.

most of the people改为most people；was often be considered语态错误，应为is often considered；considerable用词不当，应为suitable；birthday应复数birthdays。

× So I think it was a really great gift gift.

✓ So I think it is a really great gift.

描述一般事实时应使用现在时，was改为is。