巧克力— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
考生
Ya. I like eating. Not sweet. Many, much chocolate.
考官
How often do you eat chocolate?
考生
Ya. Almost every day.
考官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
考生
No, because my parents not.
考官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
考生
Because it's very delicious. The flavor is. It's a good, it's fantastic, it's.
考官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
考生
Milk and about. 55% of chocolate.
考官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
考生
Yes, it's a good.
评估
总分
语法
× Ya. I like eating. Not sweet. Many, much chocolate.
✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate. It is not very sweet. I like a lot of chocolate.
原句结构混乱，缺少完整句子，导致表达不清晰。应将短语合并成完整句子，明确表达喜欢吃巧克力且不太甜，喜欢很多巧克力。
× No, because my parents not.
✓ No, because my parents did not allow me.
原句缺少谓语动词，且代词使用不当，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语动词并明确表达父母不允许。
× Because it's very delicious. The flavor is. It's a good, it's fantastic, it's.
✓ Because it's very delicious. The flavor is good and fantastic.
原句断句不完整，缺少谓语和连词，导致表达不连贯。应合并句子，使用连词使表达完整。
× Milk and about. 55% of chocolate.
✓ Milk chocolate and chocolate with about 55% cocoa.
原句断句不完整，表达不清晰。应将信息合并成完整短语，明确表达喜欢牛奶巧克力和含约55%可可的巧克力。
× Yes, it's a good.
✓ Yes, it's a good gift.
原句缺少名词，导致表达不完整。应补充名词“gift”使句子完整。
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