记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and incorrect word forms.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can still recall the names of my junior high teachers’ friends, and at work I often remember patients’ and doctors’ names, which helps me communicate more effectively.

建议: Give a direct answer and one concrete example. Use cohesive devices (however, usually) and correct vocabulary (reminder app). Avoid repetition and fix sentence structure.

示例: Sometimes I forget small things, but I rarely forget anything important because I always write notes. For example, I use a reminder app on my phone to set alarms for important deadlines, so I don’t miss them.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. Use proper noun phrases and correct collocations (schedule meetings, names of colleagues). Replace fillers and correct tense and prepositions.

示例: As a researcher, I need to remember many work-related things, such as meeting schedules and the names of collaborators. Therefore, I keep an electronic calendar on my PC and write down important information to stay organised.

建议: Provide a clear method with linked supporting details and correct phrasing. Use linking words (for example, also) and avoid vague phrases. Mention specific tools and one reason why they help.

示例: I usually write important items in a memo app on my PC and set calendar reminders. I also share plans with colleagues so they can remind me if necessary, which reduces the chance of forgetting important tasks.

× Yes, I'll think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

'I'll think so' uses future modality incorrectly; the speaker means a present opinion. Use simple present 'I think so' to express current belief.

× Uh, I'm good at memorizing things.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. Removed filler 'Uh' for formality. Keep structure 'good at + -ing' which is correct.

× For example, I still remember the name of a teacher's friends when I was a junior high school student, and I also good at memorizing the name of patients and the doctors.

✓ For example, I still remember the names of a teacher's friends from when I was a junior high school student, and I am also good at memorizing the names of patients and doctors.

Multiple issues: 'name' should be plural 'names' (singular/plural issue), so Grammar Problem Type 1 applies here as well; 'of a teacher's friends' is awkward; use 'a teacher's friends' with 'names' or rephrase. 'When I was' should be followed by 'from when I was' for clarity (sentence structure). Missing verb 'am' before 'also good' (third person/verb omission): treat as subject-verb agreement/verb missing (use 'am'). 'the doctors' unnecessary definite article before plural 'doctors' unless specific; remove 'the'. Suggestions: use plural nouns with 'names' and include 'am' and remove unnecessary articles.

× For example, I still remember the name of a teacher's friends when I was a junior high school student, and I also good at memorizing the name of patients and the doctors.

✓ For example, I still remember the names of a teacher's friends from when I was a junior high school student, and I am also good at memorizing the names of patients and doctors.

Use 'was' correctly for the past time reference 'when I was a junior high school student'. The noun agreement with past context requires plural 'names' if referring to multiple friends/patients.

× Have you ever forgotten something important? Student: Yeah, yeah, sometimes I do. But not to forget something important.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I do, but I don't forget anything important.

'But not to forget something important' is ungrammatical. Use negative form 'I don't forget' to express that forgetting important things does not happen. Also remove repeated 'yeah' for clarity.

× I always note them down.

✓ I always write them down.

'Note them down' is acceptable in British English, but 'write them down' is more natural in general English. No grammatical error except register; kept simple present for habitual action.

× And additionally I love to use reminded app not to forget important things.

✓ Also, I like to use a reminder app so I don't forget important things.

Missing article before 'reminded app' and incorrect word 'reminded' (should be 'reminder'). 'Love to use' is acceptable but 'like to use' is more natural here. Use 'so I don't forget' to express purpose. Article error: 'a reminder app'.

× MMM I'm a researcher so I have to remember a lot of things related to my research such as schedule a meeting of name of other researchers.

✓ I'm a researcher, so I have to remember many things related to my work, such as meeting schedules and the names of other researchers.

Original sentence has several structural problems: 'such as schedule a meeting of name of other researchers' is ungrammatical. Use plural forms 'meeting schedules' and 'names of other researchers'. Add comma after 'researcher' and rephrase 'related to my work' for clarity. 'A lot of things' can be 'many things' for formality.

× I will always note them down and I also love to remember them on PC not to forget them.

✓ I always write them down, and I also like to save them on my PC so I don't forget them.

'I will always' implies future; use simple present 'I always' for habitual actions (present tense issue too). 'Remember them on PC' is incorrect collocation; use 'save them on my PC'. Include possessive 'my' and use 'so I don't forget' for purpose. Quantifier 'always' is retained but placed in present simple.

× Hmm, I love to note them down in my memo or PC and I sometimes share my thoughts with my colleagues or friends not to forget them.

✓ I like to write them down in my notebook or on my PC, and I sometimes share my notes with colleagues or friends so I don't forget them.

'Love to note' is acceptable but 'like to write' is more natural. 'Memo or PC' is awkward; use 'notebook' and 'on my PC'. 'Share my thoughts' is different from sharing notes—use 'share my notes'. Add 'so I don't forget them' to express purpose. Use prepositions 'in' for notebook and 'on' for PC.

× I think we should that several option not to forget.

✓ I think we should use several options so we don't forget things.

Original sentence misses verb 'use' and has incorrect noun forms 'option' singular and wrong word order. Correct structure: 'should use several options' and purpose clause 'so we don't forget things'.