记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., 'I'm 26 years old', 'forget things more quickly than others', 'find where I put it').

示例: Not really. I'm 26, and I often forget small things more quickly than other people. For example, I frequently misplace my keys and have to retrace my steps to find them, which is quite frustrating.

建议: Give a clear sequence with correct verb tenses and avoid exaggeration. Use linking words (e.g., 'last year', 'for example', 'because') and be precise about consequences. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes. Last year I forgot the date of an important exam; fortunately, a friend called me that morning and reminded me, so I hurriedly reviewed my notes and went to the exam. It was very stressful and taught me to set reminders in future.

建议: State a clear topic sentence and give a specific example of what you plan and how you prepare. Correct vocabulary ('note' not 'nod') and grammar, use linking words like 'for example' or 'so' to explain benefits.

示例: I need to remember my daily plans and appointments. For example, I write a detailed to-do list the night before, so I can follow it the next day and avoid forgetting important tasks.

建议: Give a concise topic sentence describing your main method, then add a specific example and correct phrasing (e.g., 'put it on my calendar' and 'set a reminder'). Use one linking word like 'for example' or 'so'.

示例: I usually set reminders on my phone calendar to remember important events. For example, if I have a flight next Monday, I set an alert a day before and another one two hours before departure.

× No, I don't think so. I'm just 26 year old, but I felt that I'm forgetting things very quickly than others.

✓ No, I don't think so. I'm just 26 years old, but I feel that I'm forgetting things much more quickly than others.

This sentence has several issues: '26 year old' needs plural 'years' and a noun form ('years old'); 'felt that I'm' mixes past and present — use present 'feel' to match ongoing condition; 'very quickly than others' is incorrect comparative structure — use 'much more quickly than others' or 'much quicker than others'. Improve by keeping consistent tense and using correct comparative form and noun phrase.'

× Yes, oh last year I forget my exam date and my friend called me on that morning that I realized it was my exam date.

✓ Yes, last year I forgot my exam date and my friend called me that morning, and I realized it was my exam date.

Use past tense 'forgot' not present 'forget' for a past event. 'On that morning' is awkward; use 'that morning'. Also split into clearer clauses: 'my friend called me that morning, and I realized...'. Ensure past-tense consistency.'

× Then I prepared and went for my exam.

✓ Then I prepared and went to my exam.

Use preposition 'to' with 'went' when indicating attending an event or place: 'went to my exam'. The structure is otherwise fine; keep past tense consistency.'

× That is the most worst thing that happened in my life about forgetting things.

✓ That is the worst thing that has happened in my life regarding forgetting things.

'Most worst' is redundant and incorrect; use 'worst' alone. Use present perfect 'has happened' to connect past event to present experience. Replace 'about' with 'regarding' or 'related to' for clearer meaning.'

× In my daily life, I try to remember my plans.

✓ In my daily life, I try to remember my plans.

This sentence is grammatical; keep as is. No change required. (Included to show checked sentence.)

× I always try to prepare a nod before that day so it will make me more easier and I won't forget things easily because of this notes.

✓ I always try to prepare a note before the day so it will make things easier for me and I won't forget things because of this note.

Several errors: 'prepare a nod' should be 'prepare a note'; 'before that day' is better as 'before the day' or 'before that day' but 'the day' is clearer; 'more easier' is incorrect (double comparative) — use 'easier'; word order 'make things easier for me' is correct; 'this notes' has number mismatch — use singular 'this note' or plural 'these notes' consistently.'

× I always try to put on my calendar if something happen important.

✓ I always try to put it on my calendar if something important happens.

Use 'put it on my calendar' (object 'it'); word order 'something important happens' — adjective before noun and verb 'happens' in present simple for general habit. 'Happen' must be 'happens' to agree with singular 'something'.'

× For example if I have a flight on next Monday, I put a remember on my calendar so it will remind me earlier.

✓ For example, if I have a flight next Monday, I put a reminder on my calendar so it will remind me in advance.

Use 'next Monday' without 'on' in this context. 'Put a remember' is wrong; use 'put a reminder'. 'Remind me earlier' is vague; use 'remind me in advance' or 'remind me beforehand'. Also add comma after 'For example' for clarity.