记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary age reference, correct tense and pronoun use, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use linking words to show examples and contrast (e.g., "however", "for example").

示例: I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, I often put items down and can’t find them a few minutes later. As a result, I rely on simple routines to avoid losing important things.

建议: Use past tense correctly and organise the story with a clear sequence: what happened, how you felt, and what you did. Avoid exaggerated phrasing like "most worst" and reduce filler words.

示例: Yes. Last year I forgot the date of an important exam. My friend called that morning and reminded me, so I quickly reviewed my notes and went to the exam. I felt very stressed, but I managed to finish it.

建议: Be specific about the kinds of plans and correct word choice. Use linking words to explain your method and benefit. Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

示例: In daily life I need to remember appointments and tasks. Therefore, I prepare a list of plans the night before, and this helps me stay organised so I don’t forget important things.

建议: Improve grammar (verb forms and article use) and use specific detail about tools and timing. Use linking words to give an example and an effect.

示例: I use my phone calendar and set reminders well in advance. For example, if I have a flight next Monday, I set an alert two days before and another one a few hours before to ensure I don’t forget.

× I'm just 26 year old, but I felt that I'm forgetting things very quickly than others.

✓ I'm just 26 years old, but I feel that I'm forgetting things much more quickly than others.

'Year' should be plural as 'years' with an age. 'Felt' is inconsistent with present situation; use present 'feel'. 'Very quickly than others' is incorrect comparative structure; use 'much more quickly than others' or 'more quickly than others'.

× Even if I put something safely and somewhere and after 10 minutes it is very difficult to find me where I put that one.

✓ Even if I put something somewhere safe, after 10 minutes it is very difficult to find where I put it.

Use adjective 'safe' after noun with correct word order 'somewhere safe'. 'Find me where I put that one' is incorrect; should be 'find where I put it'. Replace 'that one' with pronoun 'it'. Remove redundant words for clarity.

× So I'm not a memorable person.

✓ So I'm not a very memorable person.

Add modifier 'very' for natural expression. 'Memorable person' is acceptable but commonly 'a very memorable person' clarifies degree; this is a stylistic correction to improve naturalness.

× Yes, oh last year I forget my exam date and my friend called me on that morning that I realized it was my exam date.

✓ Yes. Last year I forgot my exam date, and my friend called me that morning and I realized it was my exam date.

'Forget' is present; use past tense 'forgot' to match 'last year'. 'On that morning' is awkward; use 'that morning'. Sentence split and connectors adjusted for clarity.

× Then I prepared and went for my exam.

✓ Then I prepared and went to my exam.

'Went for my exam' is understandable but 'went to my exam' or 'went to take my exam' is more natural. Maintain past tense 'prepared' and 'went'.

× That is the most worst thing that happened in my life about forgetting things.

✓ That is the worst thing that has happened in my life regarding forgetting things.

'Most worst' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'worst'. Use present perfect 'has happened' for life experience up to now. 'About forgetting things' replaced with 'regarding forgetting things' for formality.

× In my daily life, I try to remember my plans.

✓ In my daily life, I try to remember my plans.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Present simple 'try' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× I always try to prepare a nod before that day so it will make me more easier and I won't forget things easily because of this notes.

✓ I always try to make a note before the day so it makes things easier and I won't forget things because of this note.

'Prepare a nod' is incorrect; use 'make a note'. 'Before that day' -> 'before the day' or 'beforehand'. 'More easier' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'easier'. 'This notes' wrong number; use 'this note' or plural 'these notes' with consistent verbs.

× I always try to put on my calendar if something happen important.

✓ I always try to put it on my calendar if something important happens.

'Put on my calendar' is correct but needs object 'it'. Word order should be 'something important happens' (adjective before noun and correct tense). 'Happen' -> 'happens' for subject-verb agreement.

× For example if I have a flight on next Monday, I put a remember on my calendar so it will remind me earlier.

✓ For example, if I have a flight next Monday, I put a reminder on my calendar so it will remind me in advance.

'On next Monday' should be 'next Monday'. 'Put a remember' is incorrect; use 'put a reminder'. 'Remind me earlier' is vague; use 'remind me in advance'. Comma after 'For example' improves clarity.