记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix word order and tense errors.

示例: I used to be good at memorising when I was studying law about four years ago. However, these days I often forget recent tasks because I’m busier and less focused, so I rely on notes to help me remember.

建议: Give a clear direct answer, organize events chronologically and use linking words (e.g., "for example", "because"). Correct verb forms and article use will improve clarity.

示例: Yes, I have. For example, last month I booked an IELTS test but forgot to bring my ID, so I could not take the exam because the ID was required for entry.

建议: Answer directly then give specific details. Use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "set reminders", "medication"). Use linking words to connect reasons and examples.

示例: I need to remember daily tasks such as taking medication. Therefore, I use a reminder app on my iPhone to set alarms for each dose, which ensures I take my medicine on time.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how the method works and give a brief result. Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and vocabulary ("prevent me from missing a dose").

示例: I rely on the built-in reminder app on my iPhone to remember important things. It sends alerts for each medication time, which prevents me from missing doses and keeps my routine consistent.

× Well, I would say that I used to be good at memorizing things when I was sorry at the law school, like more than four years ago.

✓ Well, I would say that I used to be good at memorizing things when I was studying at law school, like more than four years ago.

The sentence uses 'was sorry at the law school' which is incorrect word choice and tense context. 'Used to' correctly indicates a past habit, so the clause should use a past continuous or simple past phrasing for the activity: 'studying at law school'. Replace 'was sorry' with 'was studying' or simply 'studying' to convey the intended meaning. Also 'law school' does not need 'the' unless referring to a specific school; 'at law school' is natural.

× But now I think that I'm not good I'm at memorizing at all.

✓ But now I think that I'm not good at memorizing at all.

There is a word order error: 'I'm not good I'm at' repeats 'I'm' and places 'at' incorrectly. The correct phrase is 'not good at' followed by the gerund 'memorizing'. Ensure no extra pronoun is inserted and keep the present tense 'I think' and 'I'm' consistent.

× I tend to forget the thing that I have recently done.

✓ I tend to forget things that I have recently done.

Using 'the thing' is unnatural here; the speaker means repeated occurrences so plural 'things' is appropriate. Also use plural agreement with 'things' and remove the unnecessary definite article 'the' to generalize the statement.

× Like Oh yes I did late last month I booked for IL test and on the test that I forgot to bring the ID card with me which is very quite important and I cannot take the test without the ID card.

✓ Oh yes, I did. Late last month I booked an IELTS test and on test day I forgot to bring my ID card, which is very important, and I could not take the test without it.

Multiple problems: tense consistency and word choice. 'Booked for IL test' is incorrect—use 'booked an IELTS test'. 'On the test that I forgot' is awkward; 'on test day I forgot' is clear. Use past 'could not' to match the past event. 'Very quite important' is redundant; choose one adverb. Replace 'the ID card with me' with 'my ID card' and avoid repeating 'ID card' unnecessarily by using pronoun 'it'.

× I used UMM reminder application in my iPhone.

✓ I use the UMM reminder application on my iPhone.

Tense mismatch: the question asks about daily life so present tense 'use' is appropriate. Also preposition 'on' is correct for devices ('on my iPhone'). Include the definite article 'the' before a named application if speaking specifically. This fits the habitual present.

× This help me to remind anything important.

✓ This helps me remember anything important.

Subject-verb agreement: 'This' (singular) requires 'helps' not 'help'. Also 'to remind anything important' is awkward—'helps me remember anything important' is natural. Remove unnecessary 'to' and simplify the verb phrase.

× Umm like every day.

✓ Um, like every day.

This is a minor punctuation/fluency issue rather than grammar per se. Use a comma after 'Um' for natural pause. Keep 'every day' as two words to indicate daily frequency.

× I use this app because I need to tag the medicine every day so when it's go to the time they will pop up and remind me to take medicine.

✓ I use this app because I need to set reminders for my medicine every day, so when it's time they pop up and remind me to take my medicine.

Multiple issues: 'tag the medicine' is incorrect; use 'set reminders for my medicine'. 'When it's go to the time' is ungrammatical; use 'when it's time'. 'They will pop up' can be simplified to 'they pop up' for habitual action. Include possessive 'my medicine' and maintain present simple for habitual events.

× I use the applications in my iPhone call reminder is help me to remind my everyday because I need to take the medicine like every day so it will pop up and remind me.

✓ I use the reminder app on my iPhone; it helps me remember every day because I need to take medicine daily, so it pops up and reminds me.

Pronoun and clause structure errors: 'applications... call reminder is help me' is garbled. Clarify: 'the reminder app... it helps me'. Use correct verb forms: 'helps' (third-person singular) and 'reminds'. Use 'on my iPhone' for the device. Use concise phrasing for habitual actions and correct pronoun reference to the app.

× It's really helped me and it's prevent me from forgetting eating the medicine.

✓ It's really helped me and it prevents me from forgetting to take the medicine.

Verb form and reflexive/pronominal issues: 'it's prevent me' should be 'it prevents me' to match third-person singular. 'Forgetting eating the medicine' is incorrect; use the infinitive 'forgetting to take the medicine' or 'forgetting the medicine'. The present perfect 'has really helped me' could also be used if referring to past effect that continues: 'It has really helped me.'