记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains some incorrect phrases such as 'I'm a golden' and 'a golden first brain'. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say 'No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember details.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember details, especially when I have a lot to learn.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors such as 'have forgot' instead of 'have forgotten'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'for that event'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important, such as my anniversary with my girlfriend, because I don't have a good memory and I didn't set a reminder on my calendar.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and does not directly answer the question. Instead, focus on what you need to remember daily, such as appointments or tasks. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments, deadlines, and important events, so I usually set reminders on my phone to help me stay organised.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to answer directly with a clear structure and use linking words to explain your method. For example, say 'Although I am not good at memorising, I use my phone's calendar to remember important meetings and events.'

示例: Although I am not good at memorising things, I use my phone's calendar to set reminders for important meetings and events, which helps me remember them easily.

× No, actually I'm a golden.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at it.

The phrase 'I'm a golden' is incorrect because 'golden' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun to describe a person in this context. The student likely intended to express that they are good at memorising, but the sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. A clearer and grammatically correct sentence is 'I'm not good at it.'

× I have a golden first brain.

✓ I have a poor memory.

The phrase 'golden first brain' is not a correct or common expression in English. The student likely intended to say they have a good or bad memory. Since the context is about not being good at memorising, 'I have a poor memory' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× I'm not good at memorizing anything, so it's such difficult for me to learn the subject, which is required a good memorable memory.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing anything, so it's very difficult for me to learn subjects that require a good memory.

The phrase 'such difficult' is incorrect; the correct form is 'very difficult' or 'such a difficult time'. Also, 'which is required a good memorable memory' is ungrammatical; it should be 'that require a good memory'. 'Memorable memory' is redundant; 'memory' suffices.

× Uh, yes, I have forgot something very important that is my anniversary with my girlfriend because I don't I don't have a good memories and I don't set the calendar for for that event, even for that event.

✓ Uh, yes, I have forgotten something very important, which is my anniversary with my girlfriend, because I don't have good memories and I didn't set the calendar for that event.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' the past participle 'forgotten' is required (Present Perfect tense). Also, 'I don't have a good memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and 'a' is singular article; it should be 'I don't have good memories'. 'I don't set the calendar' should be past tense 'I didn't set the calendar' to match the past event.

× I don't have a good memories

✓ I don't have good memories

The article 'a' is singular and cannot be used with the plural noun 'memories'. The correct form is to omit the article and say 'good memories'.

× Uh, yes, I have forgotten something important before. Like my best friend's birthday is happening because I were extremely busy with work and study and didn't set a reminder or calendar on my phone consequently. OK.

✓ Uh, yes, I have forgotten something important before, like my best friend's birthday, because I was extremely busy with work and study and didn't set a reminder or calendar on my phone, consequently.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented; combining the sentences with commas improves clarity. 'Consequently' is better placed at the end of the sentence.

× Like I said before, I am not good at remember on memorizing a thing, but when is is necessarily necessary to memory memory of things? I used to set a calendar for that like my meeting or or any subject or.

✓ Like I said before, I am not good at remembering things, but when it is necessary to remember things, I set a calendar for that, like for my meetings or any other events.

The phrase 'good at remember on memorizing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'good at remembering'. 'Is is necessarily necessary to memory memory of things' is ungrammatical and redundant; it should be 'when it is necessary to remember things'. Also, 'set a calendar for that like my meeting or or any subject or' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'set a calendar for that, like for my meetings or any other events'.