记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain with simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'terrible things that in my life' and 'short thinking'. Use natural expressions to describe your memory.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget details quickly because I have a short memory, like a goldfish.

建议: Answer directly and use past tense correctly. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Give a clear example with proper grammar and vocabulary.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, yesterday my aunt asked me to give my mum's necklace to her, but I forgot to do it.

建议: Be more concise and clear. Use correct phrases like 'take my dog for a walk' and avoid awkward expressions like 'put him to peace and poop'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For example, I always take my dog for a walk every day so he can exercise and relieve himself. This is the most important task I must remember.

建议: Use clear and correct sentences. Avoid filler words like 'umm'. Explain your methods logically with linking words. For example, mention focusing and avoiding procrastination clearly.

示例: Remembering many things is difficult for me, but I try to focus on one task at a time. Also, I avoid procrastinating because it helps me remember important things better.

× There's terrible things that in my life.

✓ There are terrible things in my life.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular. However, 'terrible things' is plural, so the correct form is 'there are'. This is a common error in subject-verb agreement with 'there be' constructions.

× I'm kind of person who have a short thinking and short memory thing.

✓ I'm the kind of person who has short thinking and a short memory.

The phrase 'kind of person' requires the article 'the' before 'kind'. Also, 'who have' should be 'who has' because the subject 'person' is singular. Additionally, 'short thinking and short memory thing' is awkward; 'short thinking' is unusual, and 'short memory thing' should be 'a short memory'.

× I always forgot something, that very important thing in my life.

✓ I always forget something, a very important thing in my life.

The adverb 'always' is used with the present tense to indicate habitual actions. Using 'forgot' (past tense) with 'always' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'forget' in present tense.

× I remember last day my aunt, uh, she called me that she asked me to put my mum necklace jewelries, uh and give it to her and I forgot.

✓ I remember that the other day my aunt called me and asked me to put my mum's necklace and jewelry away and give it to her, but I forgot.

The original sentence has several structural issues: 'last day' should be 'the other day'; 'she called me that she asked me' is incorrect, it should be 'called me and asked me'; 'mum necklace jewelries' is incorrect, it should be 'mum's necklace and jewelry'; 'and give it to her and I forgot' is run-on and unclear, so it is better to separate and clarify.

× In my daily life, there are so many things that I must remember to do it.

✓ In my daily life, there are so many things that I must remember to do.

The phrase 'remember to do it' is incorrect because 'it' is unnecessary and awkward here. The verb 'remember' is followed by the infinitive 'to do' without 'it' when referring to actions in general.

× For instance, I have to walk my dog every day around the house to put him to peace and poop, so I always walk him.

✓ For instance, I have to walk my dog every day around the house to let him rest and poop, so I always walk him.

The phrase 'put him to peace' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'let him rest' or 'give him peace'. Also, 'poop' is fine but the sentence is clearer with 'let him rest and poop'.

× There's the most important thing that I have to remember in my daily life.

✓ That's the most important thing that I have to remember in my daily life.

'There's' (there is) is used incorrectly here because the sentence refers to a specific thing already mentioned. 'That's' (that is) is more appropriate to point to a specific important thing.

× I try to keep things in once and I try to thinking one by once and of course I try to focus on things.

✓ I try to keep things in mind and I try to think one by one and of course I try to focus on things.

The verb 'try to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. So 'try to thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'try to think'. Also, 'keep things in once' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep things in mind'. 'One by once' should be 'one by one'.

× That is very the most important thing in my life and I must do it.

✓ That is the most important thing in my life and I must do it.

The phrase 'very the most important' is incorrect. The correct superlative form is 'the most important'. 'Very' is not used before 'the most'.

× I'm umm, try not to procrastinate things a lot.

✓ I'm, umm, trying not to procrastinate a lot.

The phrase 'I'm try' is incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) should be followed by a present participle verb form '-ing'. So 'I'm try' should be 'I'm trying'. Also, 'procrastinate things a lot' is awkward; better is 'procrastinate a lot'.