记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и повторений, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать более плавные и связные предложения, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности.

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because of my genetics. For example, I often spend around three hours memorising new words in my native language, and I also have to put in extra effort to learn new math formulas.

建议: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки, а также много пауз и повторений. Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику, использовать правильные времена и более чётко выражать мысли, а также избегать лишних слов.

示例: Yes, I forgot my closest friend's birthday five years ago, which was quite embarrassing because he was expecting a nice present. Since then, I always make sure to write down important dates.

建议: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более чёткие и связные предложения, избегать повторов и пауз, а также использовать связующие слова для улучшения логики.

示例: Actually, I need to remember two main things daily. First, the birthdays and names of my closest friends, classmates, and relatives to maintain good relationships. Second, I have to remember my school assignments to complete them on time.

建议: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно и связно, использовать связующие слова и более точные формулировки.

示例: That's an interesting question. I usually remember important things by writing them down, either at school, at home, or in my phone's quick notes or reminder app.

× Actually, I'm not good memorizing things due to my, uh, genetics.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things due to my, uh, genetics.

The verb 'good' is followed by the preposition 'at' before a verb in the -ing form. The phrase should be 'good at memorizing' rather than 'good memorizing'.

× I used to spend uh, around 3 hours today just to memorize new words in my native language.

✓ I spent around 3 hours today just memorizing new words in my native language.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit, but 'today' refers to the present. Also, 'just to memorize' is better expressed as 'just memorizing' to indicate the activity done. The sentence should be in past tense to match 'today' as a completed action.

× Also, I I had to go extra mile to learn new formulas in math.

✓ Also, I had to go the extra mile to learn new formulas in math.

The phrase 'go extra mile' requires the definite article 'the' and 'mile' is singular here. The correct phrase is 'go the extra mile'.

× Yes, I have forgot something important five years ago, uh, I for I forgot my closest friend, uh, birthday and it was quite embarrassing because I have to, uh, to give him an excellent presence that he was waiting, uh, since then, uh, I totally write all everything.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important five years ago. I forgot my closest friend's birthday and it was quite embarrassing because I had to give him an excellent present that he was waiting for. Since then, I have written everything down.

'Have forgot' is incorrect; the past tense of 'forget' is 'forgot'. 'Closest friend birthday' needs possessive form 'closest friend's birthday'. 'Presence' should be 'present' (a gift). 'He was waiting' should be 'he was waiting for' to complete the phrase. 'I have to' should be 'I had to' to match past tense. 'I totally write all everything' is incorrect; it should be 'I have written everything down' to indicate a completed action continuing to present.

× First of all, it's my birthdays and names of my closest friends, classmates or even relatives in order to, to keep uh, and maintain our good relationships.

✓ First of all, it's the birthdays and names of my closest friends, classmates, or even relatives in order to keep and maintain our good relationships.

'My birthdays' is vague; 'the birthdays' is more appropriate when referring to specific known birthdays. Also, the phrase 'to, to keep uh, and maintain' has unnecessary repetition and filler words; it should be simplified to 'to keep and maintain'.

× And the second one is my school assignments, uh, that I have to do it.

✓ And the second one is my school assignments that I have to do.

The phrase 'that I have to do it' is redundant because 'that' already introduces the object clause. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× That's quite interesting question.

✓ That's quite an interesting question.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before the noun phrase 'interesting question'. The correct structure is 'quite an interesting question'.

× As I remember, uh, I always write, uh, my assignments at school, at home, uh, in some, my phone, my quick notes or a reminder app there, uh, and that's all.

✓ As I remember, I always write my assignments at school, at home, on my phone, in my quick notes, or in a reminder app, and that's all.

The prepositions 'in' and 'on' are used incorrectly. We say 'on my phone' and 'in my quick notes' or 'in a reminder app'. Also, the phrase 'in some, my phone' is unclear and should be corrected for clarity.