记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear and specific details. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially memories with my loved ones. For example, I often recall special moments with my family and friends because they are very important to me. This helps me keep those memories alive and cherish them.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague expressions.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, sometimes I focus so much on helping others that I forget to take care of my own responsibilities. This has taught me to balance my time better.

建议: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to organize your thoughts logically.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember not to stress too much because life is short. Therefore, I try to focus on being happy and not dwell on painful memories. This helps me maintain a positive attitude.

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but some parts are confusing and contain minor errors. Try to avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone. This helps me organize my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or appointments. Additionally, repeating information several times makes it easier to recall later.

× I love memories with my favorite people, for example my family, my friends, my love of my life is the best decisions on my life.

✓ I love memories with my favorite people, for example my family, my friends, and the love of my life is the best decision in my life.

The phrase 'best decisions' should be singular 'best decision' because it refers to one important choice. Also, 'my love of my life' should be preceded by 'and' to correctly list items. The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to decisions in one's life.

× So I just memorizing the memories good.

✓ So I just memorize the good memories.

The verb 'memorizing' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'memorize' to match the present simple tense. Also, 'memories good' should be 'good memories' to follow correct adjective-noun order.

× Probably yes, because like I love when I helping the people in the worst part of their lives, like I can give them advice or good choices, but I just forget myself to be a good, you know, at some parts and that's kind of not good.

✓ Probably yes, because I love helping people in the worst parts of their lives, like I can give them advice or good choices, but I just forget to be good to myself at some parts and that's kind of not good.

The phrase 'when I helping' is incorrect; it should be 'I love helping' using the gerund form after 'love'. Also, 'forget myself to be a good' is incorrect; it should be 'forget to be good to myself'. The modal verb 'can' is correctly used here.

× I love when I helping the people in the worst part of their lives

✓ I love helping people in the worst parts of their lives

The preposition 'in' is correct here, but 'the worst part' should be plural 'worst parts' to match the plural 'people' and generalize the statement.

× but I just forget myself to be a good, you know, at some parts

✓ but I just forget to be good to myself at some parts

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used as the object of 'forget'. The correct structure is 'forget to be good to myself', where 'to be good' is the infinitive and 'to myself' is the prepositional phrase.

× I just forget myself to be a good, you know, at some parts

✓ I just forget to be good to myself at some parts

The preposition 'at' is correctly used here to indicate specific parts or moments.

× I just forget myself to be a good, you know, at some parts and that's kind of not good.

✓ I just forget to be good to myself at some parts and that's kind of not good.

The pronoun 'myself' is misused as the object of 'forget'. The correct form is 'forget to be good to myself' where 'to be good' is the infinitive verb and 'to myself' is a prepositional phrase indicating the beneficiary.

× That I don't have to be stressed something because the life is so short and we have to be being happy all the time being extra rent of all of us.

✓ That I don't have to be stressed about something because life is so short and we have to be happy all the time, being extra rent of all of us.

The phrase 'be stressed something' is incorrect; it should be 'be stressed about something' using the preposition 'about'. Also, 'the life' should be 'life' without the article. The phrase 'being extra rent of all of us' is unclear and likely incorrect but cannot be corrected without more context.

× we have to be being happy all the time

✓ we have to be happy all the time

The phrase 'be being happy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'be happy' to express a state in present tense.

× Just don't be sad. Just don't be, don't be.

✓ Just don't be sad. Just don't be, don't be.

No pronoun error here; sentence is repetitive but grammatically acceptable.

× Just remember this all, uh, memories which hurts you and just being happy, you know?

✓ Just remember all these memories which hurt you and just be happy, you know?

The phrase 'this all' should be 'all these' to correctly refer to plural 'memories'. Also, 'hurts' should be 'hurt' to agree with plural 'memories'. 'Just being happy' should be 'just be happy' to use the imperative form.

× Well, I originally remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone.

✓ Well, I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone.

The adverb 'originally' is incorrectly used here; 'usually' or 'generally' fits better to describe habitual action in present tense.

× This matter helps me organize my tasks and set reminders, ensuring I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

✓ This method helps me organize my tasks and set reminders, ensuring I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

The word 'matter' is incorrect in this context; 'method' is the correct noun to describe a way of doing something.

× I did. They find that repeating information, uh, allowed across things with family concepts makes it easier to recall later.

✓ I find that repeating information, especially related to family concepts, makes it easier to recall later.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I did.' is incomplete. 'They find' is inconsistent with 'I'. The phrase 'allowed across things with family concepts' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.