记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha təbii və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, 'I am not good at memorizing everything, but I can easily remember numbers.' kimi ifadə edin.

示例: I am not good at memorizing everything, but I can easily remember numbers.

建议: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və təkrarlıdır. Suallara birbaşa cavab verin və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin. Məsələn, 'I try not to forget important things, but sometimes I do, especially exams or special days.'

示例: I try not to forget important things, but sometimes I do, especially exams or special days.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I think remembering special days like birthdays or Mother's Day is more important than other things.'

示例: I think remembering special days like birthdays or Mother's Day is more important than other things.

建议: Cümləniz qarışıqdır və təkrarlamalar var. Sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I try to remember important things by organizing them in chronological order because other methods don't work for me.'

示例: I try to remember important things by organizing them in chronological order because other methods don't work for me.

× I can't memorizing it all, uh, all things, but, uh, I, I can easily memorize the numbers.

✓ I can't memorize it all, uh, all things, but, uh, I, I can easily memorize the numbers.

The verb 'can't' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Memorizing' is incorrect after 'can't'; it should be 'memorize'.

× I want to try, uh, I want, I, I want, uh, don't forget, uh, something important.

✓ I want to try, uh, I want, I, I want, uh, not to forget, uh, something important.

After 'want', the correct structure is 'want to' plus the base verb. 'Don't forget' is incorrect here; it should be 'not to forget' to express the intention.

× But sometimes I do like exam and other, uh, or a special days.

✓ But sometimes I do, like exams and other, uh, special days.

The noun 'exam' should be plural 'exams' to match 'sometimes' and the context. Also, 'a special days' is incorrect; it should be 'special days' without 'a'.

× Actually, I think umm remember special days like birthday or Mother's Day is more important than others.

✓ Actually, I think remembering special days like birthdays or Mother's Day is more important than others.

After 'think', the gerund form 'remembering' is needed to function as the object of the verb. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match the general idea.

× I tried to memorize, uh, using chronological ways because other in in the other ways I can't, uh, remember, uh, important things.

✓ I try to memorize, uh, using chronological ways because in other ways I can't, uh, remember, uh, important things.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'try' is appropriate instead of past tense 'tried'. Also, 'other in in the other ways' is corrected to 'in other ways' for clarity.