记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'is 5050' nên là 'it's 50-50' và 'depends' cần có chủ ngữ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'memories' nên là 'remembering'. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I would say my memory is about 50-50. It depends on the situation. For example, I am good at remembering things related to my job, friends, and hobbies. However, I tend to forget negative experiences.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, ví dụ 'have ever forgot' nên là 'have ever forgotten'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'many information' (information không đếm được). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. Since we deal with a lot of information daily, it's easy to forget something important. For instance, I once forgot to wish my mom a happy birthday until the end of the day, which made me feel very sad.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'there's many important thing' nên là 'there are many important things'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn với các liên từ như 'besides' và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'eat meal' chỉ cần 'eat'.

示例: There are many important things I need to remember daily. First, I have to eat meals at the right times: breakfast, lunch, and dinner. I also take care of my clothes by doing laundry regularly. Besides, I check my e-mails to stay connected with my friends and family.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'you very interesting' nên là 'you are very interested'. Câu cuối 'you can remember it at all' không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: I think remembering important things is a natural instinct. If you find something interesting or enjoyable, you are more likely to remember it easily. Even without much effort, important information tends to stay in your memory.

× I would say is 5050.

✓ I would say it is 50-50.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' after 'say'. Also, '5050' should be written as '50-50' to represent the phrase correctly.

× It's depends on the issue that I'm facing.

✓ It depends on the issue that I'm facing.

The verb 'depends' should be used with the singular subject 'it' without 'is'. 'It's depends' is incorrect because 'it's' means 'it is', so the verb 'depends' should not be used after 'is'.

× I'm good at memories of my job, my friend and my hobbies.

✓ I'm good at remembering things related to my job, my friends, and my hobbies.

The word 'memories' is a noun, but the correct form here is the gerund 'remembering' to express the ability. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× However, I'm not good at remember the negative things.

✓ However, I'm not good at remembering negative things.

After 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'. Also, 'the negative things' can be simplified to 'negative things'.

× Of course, I have ever forgot something important.

✓ Of course, I have ever forgotten something important.

The past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten' when used with 'have'. 'Forgot' is the simple past form and cannot be used after 'have'.

× Every day we live and connect with many information, so sometimes you might forget important thing.

✓ Every day we live and connect with much information, so sometimes you might forget important things.

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' should be replaced with 'much'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'important' in plural context.

× For example, on my mom's birthday, I totally forgot to congratulate her until the end of the day and that make me feel sad.

✓ For example, on my mom's birthday, I totally forgot to congratulate her until the end of the day and that made me feel sad.

The verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to agree with the past action 'forgot'.

× For me there's many important thing to remember and in daily life.

✓ For me, there are many important things to remember in daily life.

'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'.

× For me there's many important thing to remember and in daily life.

✓ For me, there are many important things to remember in daily life.

The preposition 'and' is incorrectly used; it should be 'in daily life' connected properly without 'and'.

× First I need to eat meal at the right time, breakfast, lunch and dinner.

✓ First, I need to eat meals at the right times: breakfast, lunch, and dinner.

'Meal' should be plural 'meals' because it refers to multiple meals. Also, 'time' should be plural 'times' to correspond to multiple meals.

× Beside I check my e-mail to connect with my friend and my family.

✓ Besides, I check my e-mail to connect with my friends and my family.

'Beside' is incorrect; the correct word is 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends'.

× I would like to say it is natural instinct.

✓ I would like to say it is a natural instinct.

The noun 'instinct' needs an article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun.

× If you think this is important and you very interesting or enjoy that information, you might remember it in your brain.

✓ If you think this is important and you are very interested in or enjoy that information, you might remember it in your brain.

'Interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest; 'interested' is the correct adjective to describe a person's feeling. Also, 'you very interesting' lacks the verb 'are' and should be 'you are very interested in'.

× Even though you do not put much effort into it, you can remember it at all.

✓ Even though you do not put much effort into it, you can still remember it.

The phrase 'at all' is incorrectly used here; 'still' is more appropriate to express the idea of remembering despite little effort.