记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "Memorize" kelimesi yerine "memory" kullanmak daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net yaparak gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız. Örneğin, "I think my memory is good because I easily remember information, especially related to my job" gibi. Ayrıca, örnek verirken daha spesifik olun.

示例: Yes, I believe my memory is quite good, especially when it comes to work-related information. However, when I'm busy, I sometimes forget small things like my kids' earphones or even my phone.

建议: Cümleniz çok karışık ve anlaşılması zor. Daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarlar ve anlamsız kelimelerden kaçının. Cümlenizi doğrudan ve net yaparak, olayın nasıl gerçekleştiğini açıklayın.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my wallet. I looked everywhere and called people to help me find it. Finally, I found it in my handbag.

建议: Cümleniz çok dağınık ve eksik. Daha net ve organize cevaplar verin. "I am preparing for the IELTS exam, so I try to remember English words and my daily plans" gibi net ifadeler kullanın. Gereksiz duraklamalardan ve anlamsız kelimelerden kaçının.

示例: Currently, I am preparing for the IELTS exam, so I focus on remembering English vocabulary and my daily schedule, including dance classes and bill payments.

建议: Cümleniz çok tekrar ve duraklama içeriyor. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanarak cevap verin. Örneğin, "Firstly, I set alarms for special days or events. Also, I take notes on my phone or write them on paper and place them where I can see." gibi daha net ve doğal ifadeler kullanın.

示例: Firstly, I set alarms for important days or events. Additionally, I take notes on my phone or write reminders on paper and place them somewhere visible.

× Well yes I think uh, I think my memorize is good because I easily remember information especially related to my job.

✓ Well yes I think uh, I think my memory is good because I easily remember information especially related to my job.

The word 'memorize' is a verb, but the sentence requires a noun to describe the ability. The correct noun form is 'memory'. Using 'memorize' here is incorrect because it does not fit the sentence structure.

× But sometimes especially when I'm busy, I don't remember some items, for example kids earphone, even my phone.

✓ But sometimes especially when I'm busy, I don't remember some items, for example kids' earphones, even my phone.

The phrase 'kids earphone' is incorrect because 'kids' is plural and the noun 'earphone' should also be plural and possessive to indicate ownership. The correct form is 'kids' earphones'.

× Yes, I've forgotten my wallet uh actually I thought this situation and I found everywhere I found I call everyone what what I do happens uh then I found that in my handbag.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten my wallet. Actually, I thought about this situation and looked everywhere. I called everyone to ask what to do when this happens, and then I found it in my handbag.

The original sentence has multiple tense and structure issues. 'Thought this situation' should be 'thought about this situation'. 'Found everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'looked everywhere'. 'I call everyone what what I do happens' is unclear and should be 'I called everyone to ask what to do when this happens'. The past tense is needed for completed actions.

× Well, now, uh, I preparing for IELTS exam. So I remember that English words and I remember that my plans, uh, in routine life, I remember dance, uh, pay, uh, and I cannot in my phone.

✓ Well, now, uh, I am preparing for the IELTS exam. So I remember English words and my plans. In my daily routine, I remember to dance, pay, and I keep notes on my phone.

The verb 'preparing' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'I remember that English words' is awkward; better to say 'I remember English words'. 'I cannot in my phone' is unclear; likely intended to say 'I keep notes on my phone' or similar.

× Firstly, uh, I set up alarm for, uh, certain days, uh, a special days or a special events, uh, other I note, I take note my phone notes and I, I write a paper and, uh, I saw and I put on stuff there.

✓ Firstly, uh, I set up alarms for certain days, special days, or special events. Also, I take notes on my phone, write on paper, and I see and put stuff there.

'Set up alarm' should be plural 'alarms' to match 'certain days'. 'Other I note' is unclear; corrected to 'Also, I take notes'. 'I take note my phone notes' is incorrect; it should be 'I take notes on my phone'. 'I saw and I put on stuff there' is unclear; corrected to 'I see and put stuff there' to indicate placing reminders.