记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "forgot" thay vì "forget"), đồng thời câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và không sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my keys. For example, I sometimes leave them on the table and can't find them later.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời. Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu sự rõ ràng và không đầy đủ, gây khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to do my homework, and the next day my teacher asked me about it. That made me realize I need to be more responsible.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ ("recall my recall"). Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, but the most important is my homework. Since I'm a student, doing homework helps me review what I have learned and improve my skills.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp ("metals" thay vì "methods"), câu không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích cụ thể các phương pháp bạn dùng để ghi nhớ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I remember important things by using several methods. For example, I usually take notes on my phone with simple words, which helps me recall tasks easily.

× Definitely I'm not good at memorising thing because I often forgot where I put my keys or I forgot to put my book on my bag.

✓ Definitely I'm not good at memorising things because I often forgot where I put my keys or I forgot to put my book in my bag.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to putting something inside a bag; it should be 'in'.

× Definitely I'm not good at memorising thing because I often forgot where I put my keys or I forgot to put my book on my bag.

✓ Definitely I'm not good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my keys or I forget to put my book in my bag.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the adverb 'often' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is appropriate.

× Absolutely. I often forgot do my homework and in the next day my teacher examined me and I realized I realized that I need to do it. So I'm really.

✓ Absolutely. I often forget to do my homework and the next day my teacher examines me and I realize that I need to do it. So I'm really.

'Forgot' should be 'forget' to indicate habitual action. 'Do' needs 'to' as the infinitive form 'to do'. 'In the next day' should be 'the next day'. 'Examined' should be 'examines' to match habitual present tense. 'Realized' should be 'realize' for present tense.

× Absolutely. I often forgot do my homework and in the next day my teacher examined me and I realized I realized that I need to do it. So I'm really.

✓ Absolutely. I often forget to do my homework and the next day my teacher examines me and I realize that I need to do it. So I'm really sorry.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'So I'm really.' It should be completed, for example, 'So I'm really sorry.' to make sense.

× I need to remember many things in my daily life, but I think the most important is my homework, uh, because I'm a student and the homework help me recall my recall the knowledge and improve.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life, but I think the most important is my homework, uh, because I'm a student and the homework helps me recall the knowledge and improve.

'Homework' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'my recall the knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'recall the knowledge'.

× I need to remember many things in my daily life, but I think the most important is my homework, uh, because I'm a student and the homework help me recall my recall the knowledge and improve.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life, but I think the most important is my homework, uh, because I'm a student and the homework helps me recall the knowledge and improve.

The phrase 'my recall the knowledge' is incorrect; 'recall the knowledge' is correct without 'my'.

× I remember important things by many metals, uh, for example, I usually take note in my phone with simple work and. And that's all.

✓ I remember important things by many methods, uh, for example, I usually take notes on my phone with simple words. And that's all.

'Metals' is a wrong word; it should be 'methods'. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Simple work' should be 'simple words'.