记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，表达有些夸张且不够具体，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免使用夸张的说法，并且提供具体的例子来支持观点。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can remember song lyrics and movie subtitles quite easily, as well as details like numbers and images.

建议: 回答过于简短且含糊，没有直接回答问题，也缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题，并提供具体的例子或解释。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as appointments or deadlines, which made me realize the importance of keeping reminders.

建议: 回答较为自然，但表达有些重复，且缺少具体细节。建议避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明需要记住的事情。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like meetings, appointments, and deadlines. Therefore, I usually write them down in my phone memo and check it every day to stay organized.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但有口语填充词“uh”，且表达略显重复。建议减少口语填充词，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

示例: I usually write important things down on paper or in my phone's memo app. This way, I can review them daily and ensure I don't forget anything important.

× I think I have a big brain to memorize everything, including the details like numbers, pictures and sceneries and something like that.

✓ I think I have a big brain to memorize everything, including details like numbers, pictures, scenery and things like that.

“sceneries”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应改为“scenery”。“something like that”应改为复数形式“things like that”，因为前文列举了多个事物。

× If there was one, I must have forgotten it.

✓ If there was one, I must have forgotten it.

此句中“must have forgotten”表示对过去的推测，语法正确，无需修改。

× I think there must be a bunch of things I need to remember, but the most important thing? I usually write them down in my memo and I check them every every day to ensure I won't lose it.

✓ I think there must be a bunch of things I need to remember, but the most important things? I usually write them down in my memo and I check them every day to ensure I won't lose them.

“the most important thing”应为复数“the most important things”，因为前文提到多件事物。代词“it”应改为“them”，与复数“things”保持一致。

× I usually write them down in my memo and I check them every every day to ensure I won't lose it.

✓ I usually write them down in my memo and I check them every day to ensure I won't lose them.

“every every day”重复，应改为“every day”。代词“it”应改为“them”，与复数“things”保持一致。

× I often write down the very important things, like on the paper or on my, uh, phone memo so that I can check it every day to make sure that I won't miss any important things.

✓ I often write down the very important things, like on paper or on my, uh, phone memo so that I can check them every day to make sure that I won't miss any important things.

“on the paper”中“the”不必要，应改为“on paper”。代词“it”应改为“them”，与复数“things”保持一致。