记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I used to read my favorite storybooks often, but sometimes I would forget where I placed them.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the situation.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important dates before. For instance, I once forgot my sister's birthday, and as a result, my mother scolded me for not remembering such a special day.

建议: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Use clear linking words and avoid repeating words. Be specific about how you remember deadlines.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines. Therefore, I write notes about these deadlines to ensure I don't miss them in the future.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your method of remembering important things with specific details and linking words.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing notes in my books or on my mobile phone. This way, I can quickly check my reminders whenever needed.

× Well, I'm not a good at a memorized thing.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'a good at a memorized thing' is incorrect. 'Good at' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) to indicate ability. Also, 'memorized thing' is awkward; 'memorizing things' is more natural and general.

× When I was a child, I used to read books which was very familiar, very which was one of my favorite book that was story books.

✓ When I was a child, I used to read books that were very familiar to me; story books were one of my favorites.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Books which was' should be 'books that were' to agree in number. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; splitting into two clauses improves clarity.

× And I kept in the tables and suddenly when I go to the work, I forgot the way I keep the book.

✓ I kept them on the tables, and suddenly when I went to work, I forgot where I kept the book.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on the tables' is correct. 'Go to the work' should be 'went to work' (past tense and no article). 'The way I keep the book' should be 'where I kept the book' to indicate location.

× Yes, I have forgotten some important or special deadlines when it was my sister birthday.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten some important deadlines, like my sister's birthday.

The phrase 'when it was my sister birthday' is awkward and incorrect. 'My sister's birthday' requires a possessive. Also, 'some important or special deadlines' is redundant; 'important deadlines' suffices.

× I forgot that day and my mother scold me due to the forgetting the special birthday of my sister.

✓ I forgot that day, and my mother scolded me for forgetting my sister's special birthday.

'Scold me' should be 'scolded me' (past tense). 'Due to the forgetting' is incorrect; 'for forgetting' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'The special birthday of my sister' should be 'my sister's special birthday'.

× In my daily life, I think I need to remember our deadlines for that.

✓ In my daily life, I think I need to remember my deadlines for that.

'Our deadlines' is incorrect if referring to personal deadlines; 'my deadlines' is appropriate. Also, 'for that' is vague but kept as is to maintain original meaning.

× So to remember this deadline, I'm I'm writing some notes on about the important specific deadlines that that I don't miss in the future time.

✓ So to remember these deadlines, I'm writing some notes about the important specific deadlines so that I don't miss them in the future.

'Notes on about' is incorrect; use either 'notes on' or 'notes about'. 'This deadline' changed to 'these deadlines' to agree with plural 'deadlines'. 'In the future time' is awkward; 'in the future' is correct.

× Do not remember about important things.

✓ I do not remember important things.

'Do not remember about' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' clarifies meaning.

× So if there is any important things I suddenly remember because my I told your mother to.

✓ So if there are any important things, I suddenly remember because I told my mother.

'There is any important things' is incorrect; 'there are any important things' agrees in number. The latter part is unclear; corrected to 'I told my mother' for clarity and grammar.