记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use simpler, more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, say "If I use the right methods that suit me, like visual aids, it's easier for me to memorise things."

示例: If I use methods that suit me, such as visual pictures, I find it much easier to memorise information.

建议: Focus on correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Also, try to make your answer more concise and clear. For example, "Once, I forgot my phone in a taxi while travelling to Ho Chi Minh City because I didn't check my belongings before getting off."

示例: Once, I forgot my phone in a taxi when I was travelling to Ho Chi Minh City because I didn't check my belongings before leaving the car.

建议: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, use more natural expressions. For example, "I need to remember two main things: where I put my room key so I can easily get back, and my daily schedule."

示例: I need to remember two main things: where I put my room key so I can easily find it, and my schedule for the day.

建议: Try to complete your sentences clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your method logically. For example, "I tell myself where I put important items when I place them. For instance, if I put my key in my bag's outer pocket, I remind myself of that."

示例: I usually tell myself where I put important things. For example, if I put my key in the outer pocket of my bag, I make a mental note to remember it.

× If I use the right correct correct methods for me to memorize something, uh that is suitable for me.

✓ If I use the right methods that are suitable for me to memorize something,

The phrase 'right correct correct' is redundant and incorrect. 'Right' and 'correct' have similar meanings, so only one should be used. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.

× it will be more easier to for me to memorize.

✓ it will be easier for me to memorize.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with 'easier' is redundant. Also, 'to for me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me to'.

× I have once forgot my phone on the taxi on the car when I was traveling to Ho Chi Minh City and because I didn't check it before, I didn't check my belongings before I get off the car.

✓ I once forgot my phone in the taxi when I was traveling to Ho Chi Minh City because I didn't check my belongings before I got off the car.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense of 'forget' and should be used without 'have' in this context. 'On the taxi on the car' is incorrect; 'in the taxi' is correct. Also, 'get off' should be in past tense 'got off' to match the past narrative.

× There are two things. There are two main things that I need to remember.

✓ There are two main things that I need to remember.

The first sentence is redundant as the second sentence already states the information clearly. Combining them improves sentence flow and avoids repetition.

× I can get back to my room much more easy.

✓ I can get back to my room much more easily.

'Easy' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'get back'. The correct adverb form is 'easily'.

× if I put a key in my bag and either outside of the pocket or inside the bag I will tell myself OK today I put it outside of the bag I will remind myself by.

✓ If I put a key in my bag, either outside the pocket or inside the bag, I will tell myself, 'OK, today I put it outside the bag,' and I will remind myself accordingly.

The phrase 'outside of the pocket' should be 'outside the pocket' for correct preposition use. The sentence is also incomplete and lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.