记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠清楚，建議你直接回答問題，並用簡單明確的句子說明你的記憶能力，避免冗長且不連貫的敘述。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially in subjects like history because it requires remembering many dates and facts. As a result, I often get low grades in history exams.

建议: 你的回答不完整且語句不通順，建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞組織句子，清楚描述你忘記的重要事情。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things, such as the time for group tasks, even though I have set reminders on my phone.

建议: 你的回答有些重複且語法錯誤，建議你用簡潔的句子表達你每天需要記得的事情，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay happy because my mood affects the whole day. So, every morning, I remind myself to be positive and calm.

建议: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不正確，建議你用簡潔且有條理的句子說明你記憶重要事情的方法，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

示例: I use several methods to remember important things. First, I set reminders on my phone calendar. Also, I write notes on paper so I can see them easily.

× I'm not good at memorizing the things for you.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things for you.

In English, when speaking generally about things, we usually omit 'the'. Using 'the' implies specific things already known, but here it is general, so 'the' should be removed.

× Turn the histories is a subject that is in a society field and it is need to remember a lot of things.

✓ History is a subject in the social studies field and it requires remembering a lot of things.

The phrase 'Turn the histories' is incorrect; 'history' is uncountable and singular. Also, 'in a society field' should be 'in the social studies field'. 'It is need to remember' is incorrect; correct form is 'it requires remembering' or 'it needs you to remember'.

× However, I lay off these skills so I always get a low grade of the exam on the history subject.

✓ However, I lack these skills so I always get a low grade on the history exam.

'Lay off' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'lack'. Also, 'a low grade of the exam' should be 'a low grade on the exam'. 'On the history subject' is better as 'on the history exam'.

× Yes, I often forget something that is important like such as I always forget what times I need to go to like the have the group, group, group task and also like I have already although I have set up the.

✓ Yes, I often forget important things, such as the times I need to attend group tasks, even though I have already set reminders.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'What times I need to go to like the have the group' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper pronouns and structure.

× The most important things in my daily life I need to remember is that I need to be happy every days because the our mood will influence our whole days, whole days like the motions.

✓ The most important thing in my daily life that I need to remember is to be happy every day because our mood influences our whole day, including our emotions.

'Things' should be singular 'thing' to match 'is'. 'Every days' should be 'every day'. 'The our mood' is incorrect; 'our mood' is correct. 'Whole days' should be 'whole day'. 'Like the motions' is unclear; 'including our emotions' is clearer.

× So when I wake up I always remind me to be happy and to mentally.

✓ So when I wake up, I always remind myself to be happy and mentally strong.

'I always remind me' is incorrect; reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used. 'To mentally' is incomplete; it needs an adjective like 'mentally strong'.

× I have like several skills to remember things such as the number one is that I will set up the calendars and remind it on my cell phone and when I wake up I will see the calendars and I will know on what day I'm going to do and also I will write it down on the letters when well I can see.

✓ I have several ways to remember things. First, I set up calendars and reminders on my cell phone. When I wake up, I check the calendar to know what I have to do that day. I also write things down on notes where I can see them.

'Set up the calendars and remind it on my cell phone' is incorrect; better to say 'set up calendars and reminders on my cell phone'. 'I will know on what day I'm going to do' is unclear; corrected to 'know what I have to do that day'. 'Write it down on the letters when well I can see' is unclear; corrected to 'write things down on notes where I can see them'.