记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中出现了词汇错误，如“measuring things”应为“memorising things”，这影响了表达的准确性。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并避免重复表达，如“costs me a lot of time on it every day”可以简化。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things, whether in my studies or daily life. For example, remembering vocabulary is challenging for me and takes up a lot of my time. Also, I often miss appointments if I don't write them down.

建议: 回答中时态和表达不够准确，如“Once in a time”应为“Once”或“Once upon a time”，且句子结构有些混乱。建议使用正确的时态和更连贯的句子结构。

示例: Once, I forgot my friend's birthday party. It was supposed to start on Saturday afternoon, but that morning some relatives visited my home. I got into an argument with my big sister and lost track of time. By the time I realized, the party had already started.

建议: 回答内容较为完整，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意句子结构的清晰。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my school schedule, such as class times and meal times. I also need to recall test requirements and content. If I forget any arrangements, my teacher and classmates usually remind me.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“on the everyday morning”应为“every morning”，“take them when I finish it”表达不明确。建议注意语法和用词准确性。

示例: I usually write important things in my diary. Every morning, I review my tasks and complete them one by one. This way, I don't forget anything and can improve my efficiency.

× I'm not very good at measuring things, whether on study or in the daily life.

✓ I'm not very good at memorising things, whether in study or in daily life.

这里's measuring'是拼写错误，应该是'memorising'，表示记忆。'in the daily life'中'daily life'前不需要冠词'the'。

× I fail to miss the appointments when I didn't write it down before.

✓ I fail to miss the appointments when I don't write them down before.

这里时态不一致，前半句用一般现在时，后半句用过去时不合适，应保持时态一致。'it'应改为'appointments'的复数形式'them'。

× Once in a time, I forgot my friend's birthday party.

✓ Once upon a time, I forgot my friend's birthday party.

习惯表达是'Once upon a time'，表示过去某个时间点。

× It would start at Saturday afternoon and in the morning some of my relatives visited my home.

✓ It started on Saturday afternoon and in the morning some of my relatives visited my home.

事件已经发生，应该用过去时。'would start'不合适。

× I found I really heated up with my big sister and even forget the time.

✓ I found I had really heated up with my big sister and even forgot the time.

过去完成时'had heated up'表示在过去某时之前发生的动作，'forget'应改为过去式'forgot'。

× When I finally realized it, the party had begun.

✓ When I finally realized it, the party had already begun.

加上'already'使句子更自然，强调派对已经开始。

× I need to remember my school schedule in my daily life, such as the time of having class and having meal, the requirements and content for tests if I forgot some arrangements my teacher and classmates will remind me of.

✓ I need to remember my school schedule in my daily life, such as the time of having classes and meals, the requirements and content for tests. If I forget some arrangements, my teacher and classmates will remind me of them.

'class'和'meal'应使用复数形式。'forgot'应改为一般现在时'forget'，因为是习惯动作。句子过长，分成两句更清晰。

× I usually write it down on my diary book and on the everyday morning I look through the significant undertakings and take them when I finish it.

✓ I usually write it down in my diary, and every morning I look through the important tasks and complete them when I finish them.

'write down in diary'更常用，'on the everyday morning'应改为'every morning'。'significant undertakings'改为更自然的'important tasks'。'take them'不合适，改为'complete them'。

× Therefore, I won't forget any of them and improve my efficiency at the same time.

✓ Therefore, I won't forget any of them and will improve my efficiency at the same time.

前后时态不一致，'improve'应加助动词'will'保持将来时态。