记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些重复且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式，例如用"I find it easier to remember things that interest me, like thrilling plots or song lyrics, but I struggle with complex theories."

示例: I find it easier to remember things that interest me, like thrilling plots in books or lyrics of my favorite songs. However, I struggle to memorize complex theories because they seem boring and difficult to me.

建议: 回答中信息较多但表达略显冗长，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。可以更具体说明忘记的重要事情。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially during exams on scientific subjects. I get nervous and find it hard to remember complex formulas. Also, my lack of confidence and introverted nature sometimes cause me to forget important tasks when I need to perform.

建议: 回答内容具体且条理清晰，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词如"for example"或"also"来增强连贯性。

示例: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, in college, I had to remember the exact times of my classes and experiments since the schedule was irregular. I also needed to keep track of deadlines for presentations and homework. In daily life, I remember when to take medicine and appointments with others.

建议: 回答内容丰富且结构较好，但部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的时态和表达方式，如"I used to write down important information in a notebook"，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I used to write down important information in a notebook during high school to remind myself of homework and exams. Now, I send text messages to myself on my smartphone so I can check my schedule anytime. If something is very important, I inform my family in advance and ask them to remind me.

× I'm sure I'm good at memorizing those things that I'm interested in, such as those twisting and thrilling plot of the book and movie and some lyrics of my favorite songs.

✓ I'm sure I'm good at memorizing those things that I'm interested in, such as those twisting and thrilling plots of the book and movie and some lyrics of my favorite songs.

这里的“plot”指的是多个故事情节，应该使用复数形式“plots”。中文解释：名词复数形式使用错误，表示多个情节时应使用复数。

× However, for those scenes, I feel difficult and boring.

✓ However, for those scenes, I feel difficulty and boredom.

“feel”后应接名词而非形容词，表示感受时用名词形式。中文解释：动词后接名词表达感受，不能直接接形容词。

× Like I always try hard to memorize those difficult theories and complex.

✓ Like I always try hard to memorize those difficult theories and complex concepts.

“complex”在此处应为名词，需补充名词“concepts”使句子完整。中文解释：缺少名词导致句子不完整，需补充名词。

× especially when I was taking some exams about those scientific subjects since I'm easy to become nervous and it's really difficult for me to memorize those difficult, serious and complex formulas.

✓ especially when I was taking some exams about those scientific subjects since I easily become nervous and it's really difficult for me to memorize those difficult, serious and complex formulas.

“I'm easy to become nervous”表达不自然，应改为“I easily become nervous”。中文解释：表达习惯错误，副词修饰动词更合适。

× since I'm not so confident about myself and I'm an introvert person, I will forget something important when I need to perform.

✓ since I'm not so confident in myself and I'm an introverted person, I will forget something important when I need to perform.

“confident about myself”应为“confident in myself”，“introvert person”应为“introverted person”。中文解释：介词和形容词使用错误，需用正确搭配。

× When I was in college, I need to remember the exact time of my class and experiment because we don't have a regular schedule.

✓ When I was in college, I needed to remember the exact time of my class and experiment because we didn't have a regular schedule.

描述过去情况，动词应使用过去时。中文解释：时态错误，描述过去事件应使用过去时。

× And in my daily life, I need to remember what time to take medicine and appointment with somebody else.

✓ And in my daily life, I need to remember what time to take medicine and appointments with somebody else.

“appointment”应为复数形式“appointments”，表示多个约会。中文解释：名词复数形式使用错误，表示多个约会时应使用复数。

× Well, in high school, I will write down those important information on the notebook to remind me that I have a lot of homework and exams to finish.

✓ Well, in high school, I would write down that important information in the notebook to remind me that I had a lot of homework and exams to finish.

“information”是不可数名词，前面不加复数形式“those”；时态应与过去时间一致。中文解释：不可数名词误用复数，时态不一致。

× Well, in high school, I will write down those important information on the notebook to remind me that I have a lot of homework and exams to finish.

✓ Well, in high school, I would write down that important information in the notebook to remind me that I had a lot of homework and exams to finish.

“write down ... on the notebook”应为“write down ... in the notebook”。中文解释：介词使用错误，写在笔记本里用“in”。

× And if there's something that very important, I will inform my family in advance and ask them to remind me.

✓ And if there's something very important, I will inform my family in advance and ask them to remind me.

“that”在此处多余，应去掉。中文解释：多余的关系代词，影响句子流畅。