记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达并直接回答问题。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often review my notes to keep the information fresh in my mind.

建议: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子并具体说明如何避免忘记重要事情。

示例: No, I rarely forget important things because I make lists and review them regularly to stay organized.

建议: 表达不清楚，信息混乱，建议明确说明需要记住的具体事项并使用连贯的句子。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my grandmother's health condition and my daughter's daily needs, such as meals and school schedule.

建议: 句子结构混乱且用词不当，建议使用简单明了的句子描述记忆方法。

示例: I remember important things by repeating them to myself and writing notes to help me recall them later.

× Yes, as a student of liberal artists in Senior High School, I always remember things to fresh my study.

✓ Yes, as a student of liberal arts in Senior High School, I always remember things to refresh my study.

这里“liberal artists”应为“liberal arts”，表示文科专业；“fresh”用作动词不正确，应使用“refresh”表示“使恢复、使清新”。

× No, because I'm proud to do that. Memorizing things as a Senior High School student in liberal arts, I always. Exercise my memoration so I don't forget.

✓ No, because I'm proud to do that. As a Senior High School student in liberal arts, I always exercise my memory so I don't forget.

原句中“Memorizing things as a Senior High School student in liberal arts, I always.”句子不完整，且“Exercise my memoration”表达不正确，应改为“exercise my memory”。

× I need to stay with my grandmother and a daughter every day, so I must remember my grandmother's COVID and my daughter's need in daily life.

✓ I need to stay with my grandmother and my daughter every day, so I must remember my grandmother's COVID condition and my daughter's needs in daily life.

“a daughter”应为“my daughter”，表示特指；“my grandmother's COVID”表达不完整，需加“condition”表示病情；“my daughter's need”应为复数“needs”，表示多项需求。

× After the exciting of remembering in Senior High School, I train cheaper important things in my mind and I always remind them in my mind.

✓ After the excitement of remembering in Senior High School, I train to remember important things in my mind and I always remind myself of them.

“exciting”应为名词“excitement”；“train cheaper important things”表达不清，应为“train to remember important things”；“remind them in my mind”应改为“remind myself of them”，正确使用反身代词和动词短语。