记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points. For example, instead of 'I could remembering numbers but in general I am not a good person so I basically rely on,' say 'I can remember numbers quite well, but generally, I am not very good at memorising things, so I usually rely on other methods.' Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and avoid redundancy.

示例: No, I wouldn't say I'm very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my keys or phone. However, I am quite good at remembering numbers, like phone numbers or PINs. Generally, I tend to rely on notes or reminders to help me remember important information.

建议: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to make your answer flow better. For example, instead of 'I remembered it 10 days ago, but one night before her birthday I just. It just went out of my mind,' say 'I remembered it 10 days in advance, but the night before her birthday, it completely slipped my mind.' Also, try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I often forget things. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. Although I remembered it 10 days beforehand, the night before, it completely slipped my mind, so I missed wishing her at midnight.

建议: Improve clarity and avoid unclear phrases like 'on TA on track' and 'keep black on the activities.' Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'In daily life, it's important to remember basic things such as work hours and household chores so that we stay organised and complete our tasks on time.' Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: In daily life, I need to remember important things like my work schedule and household chores. This helps me stay organised and ensures I complete all my tasks on time.

建议: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, instead of 'I would remember it through my mind,' say 'I try to remember big events mentally.' Also, avoid repetition like 'little and little small things.' Use linking words to connect ideas, such as 'However, for smaller tasks, I use reminder apps or calendars to make sure I don't forget them.'

示例: For important events, I try to remember them mentally. However, for smaller tasks, I use reminder apps or calendars to ensure I don't forget anything important.

× Though I would say I could remembering numbers but in general I am not a good person so I basically rely on.

✓ Though I would say I could remember numbers but in general I am not a good person so I basically rely on.

The verb 'could' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'could remembering' is incorrect and should be 'could remember'.

× I remember once I've forgotten my best friend's birthday.

✓ I remember once I forgot my best friend's birthday.

The phrase 'I've forgotten' (present perfect) is not appropriate here because the action is a specific past event. The simple past tense 'I forgot' is correct for a specific past event.

× I remembered it 10 days ago, but one night before her birthday I just.

✓ I remembered it 10 days ago, but the night before her birthday I just forgot.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'I just'. Adding 'forgot' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I couldn't wish her on at 12.

✓ I couldn't wish her at 12.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'wish her at 12'.

× The basic things should be kept track of in our day-to-day life.

✓ The basic things should be kept track of in our day-to-day lives.

The phrase 'day-to-day life' should be plural 'day-to-day lives' when referring to multiple people's daily routines.

× For example, our job timings or other household chores that we are supposed to do should be remembered by us so that we can be on TA on track every time and do not keep black on the activities that we are supposed to do.

✓ For example, our job timings or other household chores that we are supposed to do should be remembered by us so that we can be on track every time and do not fall behind on the activities that we are supposed to do.

The phrase 'be on TA on track' is incorrect; it should be 'be on track'. Also, 'keep black on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fall behind on'. These corrections improve clarity and correctness.

× If they are really big events I would remember it through my mind, but if I have a little and little small things, I will always keep them as my reminders on reminder app or the calendar so that I do not miss on them and because they count as important.

✓ If they are really big events I would remember them in my mind, but if I have little or small things, I will always keep them as reminders on my reminder app or calendar so that I do not miss them because they count as important.

The phrase 'remember it through my mind' is awkward; 'remember them in my mind' is better. 'A little and little small things' is redundant; 'little or small things' is correct. 'Keep them as my reminders on reminder app' should be 'keep them as reminders on my reminder app'. Also, 'miss on them' should be 'miss them'. These changes improve grammar and clarity.