记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ chưa tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget my keys at work because I'm usually distracted when leaving. This makes me feel worried because I have to go back to get them.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý đã nói trước đó và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để nối các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once left my keys at work and only realized it after I got home. I felt worried and had to return to get them.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về các việc cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines at school, especially assessments. Managing my time well helps me complete tasks and avoid stress. Besides that, I also keep track of appointments and meetings to stay organized.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually use my iPhone and Google Calendar to remember important dates and events. These tools help me stay organized and make sure I don't miss any tasks.

× For example, are there?

✓ For example, sometimes it happens.

The phrase 'are there?' is incomplete and incorrect in this context. The sentence needs a subject and verb to be grammatically correct. 'There be' structure is used to indicate existence, but here it is misused. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.

× I'm so realized that I haven't gotten my keys at my workplace.

✓ I realize that I haven't gotten my keys at my workplace.

The phrase 'I'm so realized' incorrectly uses the past participle 'realized' with 'am'. The correct form is the simple present 'I realize' to express current awareness. 'I'm so realized' is ungrammatical.

× I haven't gotten my keys at my workplace.

✓ I haven't gotten my keys from my workplace.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here because you get or take something 'from' a place, not 'at' a place. Using 'from' correctly indicates the origin of the keys.

× So it makes me feel quite worried and I think it's happening because I'm often distracted and not fully focused on when I leave.

✓ So it makes me feel quite worried, and I think it's happening because I'm often distracted and not fully focused when I leave.

The conjunction 'and' is used correctly, but the phrase 'focused on when I leave' is awkward. Removing 'on' after 'focused' is correct because 'focused' is followed directly by the object or clause. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× Yeah, that is my the previous mentions.

✓ Yeah, that is what I mentioned previously.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'My the previous mentions' is incorrect. The correction uses a proper relative clause and correct word order to express the intended meaning.

× Sometimes I come home, then I realize that I have forgotten my keys from my workplace.

✓ Sometimes I come home, then I realize that I have forgotten my keys at my workplace.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here because you forget something 'at' a place, not 'from' a place. 'At' indicates the location where the keys were left.

× So I'm really worried and I don't I don't know what I can do or I can return to my workspace to take it.

✓ So I'm really worried and I don't know what I can do or if I can return to my workspace to take it.

The sentence has a repeated phrase 'I don't I don't' which is an error. Also, the conjunction 'or' should be 'or if' to introduce the alternative possibility properly.

× Many things my time well helps me finish my work, contact or avoid stress.

✓ Managing my time well helps me finish my work, stay in contact, or avoid stress.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper quantifiers and verbs. 'Many things my time well' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses appropriate verbs and quantifiers.

× Firstly, I used my Norton iPhone to drop down important days or events I must remember.

✓ Firstly, I use my iPhone to note down important days or events I must remember.

The phrase 'used my Norton iPhone to drop down' is incorrect. 'Drop down' is not the correct phrasal verb here. 'Note down' or 'write down' is appropriate. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match present tense context.

× Actually, I usually use my Google Calendar to have me stay organized and ensure that I don't get any tasks.

✓ Actually, I usually use my Google Calendar to help me stay organized and ensure that I don't miss any tasks.

The phrase 'have me stay organized' is awkward and incorrect. 'Help me stay organized' is the correct expression. Also, 'don't get any tasks' is incorrect; 'don't miss any tasks' fits the context better.