记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I use my”不完整，且“on focusing things”表达不准确。建议注意句子完整性和正确搭配，同时避免重复表达。

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I get distracted easily. For example, when I'm using my phone and a notification pops up, I often forget what I was doing. This makes it hard for me to focus.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“just a weak moment before”和“this is my month birthday”不符合英语习惯。建议加强语法基础，使用简单明了的句子表达具体内容。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once forgot my mum's birthday, which made me feel very sorry because I should have remembered it.

建议: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不连贯，如“my academic”用词不准确，且最后一句不完整。建议使用完整句子，合理连接信息，使表达更清晰。

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, I have to keep track of homework deadlines and group project due dates. Also, I need to plan and prepare for my exams in advance.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“Since I am a forgetful person, so”重复连接词，且部分表达不够自然。建议注意句子连接词的使用，保持表达简洁流畅。

示例: Because I am forgetful, I make a to-do list every day and set alarms to remind me of important tasks. I also write down assignment deadlines in my calendar.

× There are plenty things I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are plenty of things I need to remember in my daily life.

这里缺少介词“of”，短语应为“plenty of things”，表示“许多事情”。

× I always forgot something important, just a weak moment before.

✓ I always forget something important, just a weak moment before.

句子描述的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去时“forgot”。

× This makes it quite difficult for me on focusing things.

✓ This makes it quite difficult for me to focus on things.

动词“difficult”后应接不定式“to focus”，且“focus”后应加介词“on”，表示“专注于某事”。

× I really apologize for her because this is my month birthday and I should be remembered but however I don't so.

✓ I really apologize to her because this is my mum's birthday and I should remember it but I don't.

“apologize”后应接介词“to”加对象，“my month birthday”应为“my mum's birthday”，且“should be remembered”应改为主动语态“should remember it”。

× And I also will list out what the assignment deadline in my calendar.

✓ And I will also list out the assignment deadlines in my calendar.

“list out”后应直接接宾语，且“deadline”应为复数“deadlines”，表示多个截止日期。

× Since I am a forgetful person, so I will try to make A to do list every day or set an alarm to remind me what I need to do on that day or that week.

✓ Since I am a forgetful person, I will try to make a to-do list every day or set an alarm to remind me what I need to do on that day or that week.

“Since”表示原因，后面不应再用“so”，两者重复。

× I often get distracted easily.

✓ I often get easily distracted.

副词“easily”修饰动词“distracted”，应放在“get”和“distracted”之间，更符合英语习惯。