记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'I Northeast'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I practice yoga and meditation, which help improve my concentration. Additionally, I often make lists for shopping or other tasks to remember them easily.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent.

示例: As far as I remember, I have never forgotten important events because I usually make a list or set a timer on my phone, so I can complete tasks on time.

建议: Your answer includes relevant points but is somewhat unclear and contains errors like '4 home groceries'. Try to be more specific and organise your answer with linking words for clarity.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember things like buying groceries for my home, following my daily routine, and planning my meals to stay healthy.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear, especially the phrase 'I make on this'. Try to be more precise and use linking words to explain your methods clearly.

示例: I remember important things in several ways. For example, I set reminders on my phone and organise my tasks to ensure I complete them on time.

× Yes, I'm really good in memorizing things because I do yoga and meditation for my memories which helps me to concentrate on many things as I am a good memorable person.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things because I do yoga and meditation for my memory which helps me to concentrate on many things as I am a good memorable person.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' not 'in'. Also, 'memories' should be 'memory' as it refers to the faculty of remembering, not multiple memories.

× I Northeast I really make the list for my shopping or any other stuff.

✓ I usually make a list for my shopping or any other stuff.

The phrase 'I Northeast' is unclear and seems incorrect. Replacing it with 'I usually' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× As I remember I never forgot my important events because whenever I I have any important task I usually make a list or make a timer in my phone to remember it on time and make it happen.

✓ As I remember, I have never forgotten my important events because whenever I have any important task, I usually make a list or set a timer on my phone to remember it on time and make it happen.

The past tense 'forgot' should be in present perfect 'have forgotten' to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'make a timer' is better expressed as 'set a timer'. Added commas for clarity.

× I usually make a list or make a timer in my phone to remember it on time and make it happen.

✓ I usually make a list or set a timer on my phone to remember it on time and make it happen.

The correct preposition with 'timer' and 'phone' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'make a timer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'set'.

× In daily lives there are many things like 4 home groceries and my daily routine, what I have to do and what I have to eat in my daily routine for making my health fit as a fiddle.

✓ In daily life, there are many things like home groceries and my daily routine, what I have to do and what I have to eat in my daily routine to keep my health fit as a fiddle.

'Daily life' is singular and should not be pluralized as 'daily lives'. Also, '4 home groceries' is unclear; removing '4' clarifies the meaning. 'For making my health' is better expressed as 'to keep my health'.

× But to to make my work on time and organize my work, I make on this and set a reminder in my phone.

✓ But to complete my work on time and organize it, I make a list and set a reminder on my phone.

The phrase 'make on this' is incorrect and unclear; replacing it with 'make a list' clarifies the meaning. Also, the preposition with 'phone' should be 'on' not 'in'. Added 'complete' to clarify the action.