记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“not good at about the memories”应改为“not good at memorising things”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更准确的词汇。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially faces and names of strangers. Therefore, I usually write notes on paper or use my smartphone to help me remember.

建议: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“I'm not forgotten”应为“I haven't forgotten”。建议注意时态一致性，句子结构要完整，表达更自然。

示例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. For important tasks, I set alarms and write them on my calendar. I believe preparing early helps me avoid forgetting.

建议: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议理清思路，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意词汇的准确使用。

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, especially my studies. For example, I have to remember the time to attend classes and the assignments I need to prepare and complete before the deadlines.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“use the paper for me”应改为“use paper”. 建议简化表达，使用连词使句子更连贯。

示例: I usually write important things on paper, such as in my calendar or notes. Sometimes, I also use my smartphone to set alarms to remind me when to do tasks.

× No, I'm not good at about the memories because for me to remember the stranger face and the names is a little hard for me.

✓ No, I'm not good at memories because for me, remembering strangers' faces and names is a little hard.

介词“at”后不应加“about”，应直接接名词“memories”。此外，“stranger face”应为复数所有格“strangers' faces”，表示多个陌生人的脸。

× No, I'm not good at about the memories because for me to remember the stranger face and the names is a little hard for me.

✓ No, I'm not good at memories because for me, remembering strangers' faces and names is a little hard.

“stranger face”应为复数形式“strangers' faces”，因为指多个陌生人的脸。

× So I will use the paper and the smartphone to remind me.

✓ So I will use paper and my smartphone to remind me.

“use the paper”中“the”不合适，改为泛指“paper”；“the smartphone”应具体指“my smartphone”。

× No, I'm not forgotten something important.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten something important.

“I'm not forgotten”时态错误，应使用现在完成时“haven't forgotten”表示过去到现在的经历。

× For these important things I will make alarm and to write it on my calendar.

✓ For these important things, I will set an alarm and write them on my calendar.

“make alarm”应为“set an alarm”；“to write”前不需“to”，且“it”应指代复数“them”。

× I think these important things need to prepare early, so I will not forgot that.

✓ I think these important things need to be prepared early, so I will not forget that.

“forgot”是过去式，句中应使用动词原形“forget”；“need to prepare”应改为被动语态“need to be prepared”。

× There are a lot of things I need to remember, but the important thing is this study.

✓ There are a lot of things I need to remember, but the important thing is this study.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I need to remember how time I need to go to class and what text I need to prepare and finish.

✓ I need to remember what time I need to go to class and which texts I need to prepare and finish.

“how time”应为“what time”；“text”应为复数“texts”，表示多篇文章或材料。

× The important thing is the deadline. I need to finish the text more well.

✓ The important thing is the deadline. I need to finish the text better.

“more well”是不正确的比较级形式，应使用“better”。

× I will use the paper for me, I have a calendar, notes, everything I will write on it and sometimes I will use this smartphone.

✓ I will use paper for myself; I have a calendar, notes, and I will write everything on them, and sometimes I will use my smartphone.

“for me”应为“for myself”；“this smartphone”应为“my smartphone”；“everything I will write on it”中“it”指代不明，应改为“them”指代复数。

× I will set alarm to remind me what time I need to do.

✓ I will set an alarm to remind me what time I need to do something.

“set alarm”应为“set an alarm”；句尾缺少宾语，需补充“something”或具体内容。