记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating your ability and giving a specific example. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially numbers. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers or important dates without writing them down.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid awkward phrasing and provide a brief reflection on the experience.

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important paper when I left my bag on the bus while going to school. It was a big mistake, and I learned to be more careful with my belongings.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas better, use linking words, and be more specific about what you need to remember. Avoid filler words like 'umm'.

示例: As a student, I need to remember my lessons and any questions the teacher asks me to prepare for. Also, since I have a part-time job, I must remember the work culture and code of conduct.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with linking words. Explain your method clearly and avoid filler words.

示例: I remember important things by studying them carefully rather than just writing notes. This helps me understand and memorise the information better.

× Yes, I have forgotten my very important paper.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten a very important paper.

The article 'my' is not incorrect grammatically, but 'a' is more appropriate here to indicate one important paper among possible others. However, this is more about article usage, so the main issue is the article, which is covered under article errors (ID 22). But since the instruction is to only correct mistakes that meet the grammar problem type list, and article errors are ID 22, this correction is valid.

× When I was in school, I was going through the bus to my school.

✓ When I was in school, I was going on the bus to my school.

The preposition 'through' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate traveling by bus is 'on'. 'Going on the bus' is the correct phrase to express traveling by bus.

× when teacher says something that you need to answer the particular question tomorrow at that time I think I need to remember that.

✓ when the teacher says something that I need to answer a particular question tomorrow, at that time I think I need to remember that.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; the student should refer to themselves using 'I' to maintain consistency and clarity. Also, 'teacher' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I also do part time jobs so I need to remember my work culture, umm code of conduct.

✓ I also do part-time jobs so I need to remember my work culture, umm, the code of conduct.

The phrase 'code of conduct' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific set of rules. Also, 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective.

× whenever I think that is important for me to remember at that time I memorized.

✓ whenever I think that is important for me to remember, at that time I memorize it.

The verb 'memorized' is in the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'memorize' to indicate a habitual action. Also, adding 'it' clarifies the object of memorization.